Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

wow, this is an outstanding piece of poetry dear kim! it's a beautiful piece of romance poetry and it does effect the lonely heart. nice one my friend!
if i had six stars, you would be first to get it.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017

Hi Rebekka,

I'll take a virtual six any day of the week. I appreciate your enthusiastic comments. :)
Thanks!! Kim

Comment from CD Richards

Excellent

It wouldn't be a love poem without hockey ;-)

Forgive me, I know hockey is only one of your obsessions...

This is quite lovely, and a good tribute to Elizabeth Barrett Browning (as well as hubby, of course).

My favourite bit is:

My love, it's your sky blue eyes -
to melt my staunch resolve;
made stars align in my skies,
around which I revolve.

You know I'm a sucker for all things celestial.

Very nice job Kim. Alas I have no sixes left, so I hope a 5 and heartfelt admiration will do.

Craig

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017

Hi Craig,

I'll take your heartfelt admiration over any type of a six any day :) Thank you for the wonderful comments. I'm hoping James will like it. One month 'til our 22nd anniversary. (Can you believe it? lol) This is me starting my Anniversary present early. I've never read much of EBB, I like her. I appreciate your review.

Kim

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Your love poem is tender and beautifully composed. I particularly took notice of this, which I enjoyed so much.
"My love, we're like hockey games,
for that's what brings you smiles:
souls consumed by fiery flames
glowing gold and blue for miles."
Your author's note is interesting and informative. Thank you for sharing. Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017

Hi Marilyn:

I'm glad you enjoyed this one, and especially the hockey stanza. Our 22nd anniversary is a month away and I'm actually getting an early start for a change lol Thank you for all of the wonderful comments.

Kim

reply by BeasPeas on 07-Apr-2017

Happy anniversary. :)

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Exceptional

OH my lady this is an excellent rendition of a single type of writing and an excellent piece for the contest. Strong and determined.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017

Hi Barb,

Thank you so much for this exceptional six star rating and review. I always appreciate hearing what you think of my poems. I hadn't read many of Elizabeth Barrett Browning's poems, but I decided I like her.

Kim

Comment from Rlegel99

Excellent

Interesting poem about love and living someone. These poems have nice flow. The rhythm and rhyme add to the reader's enjoyment. Thank you for sharing this piece of poetry.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017

Hi Rlegel:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your comments.

Kim

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

What a lovely tribute to the poetry of Elizabeth Barrett Browning. Oh, you can almost feel the tenderness she lavishes upon him, you have written this so amazingly well! I loved learning all of this about her, blessings...

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017

Hi Irish:

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate all of your fine comments.

Kim

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem Kim. I love the style , very different and distinctive, you expressed a deep love in this write. It went perfect with the style. well done.
~Kerry~

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017

Hi Kerry,

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the kind comments and your time.

Kim

Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, a lovely poem, significantly reminiscent of the works of Elizabeth Barrett Browning - illustrious in its structure and rhythm and smooth in its engaging read...

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017

Hi eve,

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your comments.

Kim

reply by evesayshi on 07-Apr-2017

Hi, Kim,
You are very welcome - just lovely...Eve

Comment from Thor R

Excellent

I liked the poem and how it was inspired by Ms. Browning. I'm a sucker for when people take famous poets or poems and reimagine them. I have no comments to improve it.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017

Hi tlray,

This is National Poetry Writing Month and as such I am paying homage to the famous poets and writing a poem a day for the NaPoWriMo Challenge. The premise of this book is just as you have described in your comments. There is a link from this poem to the other selections in the book, feel free to follow along if you like. I hope you'll enjoy all of the selections. Thank you for this wonderful review.

Kim

Comment from mmonaghan777

Excellent

Excellent! So beautiful, well written especially the rhyming, and what a great tribute to love. This should be a classic Valentine's poem.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017

Hi mmonaghan,

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the enthusiastic endorsement of my poem in your wonderful comments.

Kim