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Echoes of Artistry

Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Happy Birthday, Joe!"
NaPoWriMo 2017

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Comment from sheena121
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A very informative biography set in poetry form, I didn't know anything about Pulitzer, although I have heard of the Pulitzer prize. well written and matter of fact. Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    Hi Sheena,

    I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Thank you for the kind comments. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from ronnie k
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An encouraging write, it what one has value in that exposes his values within, it does not have to be seen from a distance because it will reveal itseft

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    Hi Ronnie k,

    I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Thank you for the kind comments. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from cholb22
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Pulitzer Prize something we are all familiar with hearing yet do not perhaps no much about its namesake, I feel I know a little now!! Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    Hi cholb22:

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your comments. :) Have a wonderful day!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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What not he tried? But what is the result? A pen would bring in name, fame and glory; whatever we try, it is never smooth, only continuity will bring in fruition, I liked.

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    Hi Alcreator,

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I'm happy that you enjoyed this piece. I appreciate your comments. Have a great day!
Comment from Mame
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Terrific work here. You have told a story in true poetic form with a lively rhythm. The picture is amazing- so apt. I now kniw much more about the 'real' Joe from your entertaining poem- well done.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    Hi Mame,


    I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. I thought it only fitting on his birthday that we all know who the benefactor for those coveted prizes really was. Thank you for the generous rating and comments.
Comment from dmt1967
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I like the way the poem unfolded and became a story and characterization of Joe. I enjoyed the beat and took pleasure in the growth of the poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    Hi dmt,


    I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. I thought it only fitting on his birthday that we all know who the benefactor for those coveted prizes really was. Thank you for the great comments and good luck wishes.