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Writer's Block 5/7/5

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Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Alas, the bane of every writer of prose or poetry. A very good poem especially for this group of misfits. That's the description that best fits them.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Thanks for reading and interesting comments zanya
Comment from bhogg
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Thanks for bringing a chuckle my way. You are soooo right. Sometimes, no hard I try, I just can't find that damn muse, but sometimes I wake up in the middle of the night....

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Great review !zanya
Comment from tfawcus
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Yes, the music is always there, even at the times when we cannot transcribe it with any sense of satisfaction. I suppose that the knowledge of it lurking in the background is the motivation that keeps us writing!

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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This is a fantastic 5-7-5 Haiku on writers block, "Muse lurks in shadows" love this line. Hope your having a nice Easter. ~Kerry~

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 23-Apr-2017
    Your welcome
Comment from Mustang Patty
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thank you for sharing your entry for the Writer's Block 5-7-5 contest. Within these few syllables, you've managed to convey a great deal of information. The words won't flow because the muse is staying away. Good luck in the contest with this lovely work,
~patty~

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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Thanks for the encouraging words zanya
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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Very good Haiku.
It consists of three lines.
Each has a syllable count: 5-7-5
Total syllable count: 17
Great artwork: The image is a perfect match for this poem.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Thanks for the critique zanya