2017 Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "haiku (delightful aroma)"A collection of my poems
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Comment from Irish Rain
Well this is a great entry in the Red Rose Haiku contest, because that's my favorite thing about the rose, the lovely scent. Beautiful picture too, blessings...
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Well this is a great entry in the Red Rose Haiku contest, because that's my favorite thing about the rose, the lovely scent. Beautiful picture too, blessings...
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words my friend.
Comment from Val Crisson
Nice haiku, one of few in the contest. Could I make on suggestion - "red rose blossoms" how about "red rose blooms" That way you keep it in the singular, which way more powerful in a haiku.
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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Nice haiku, one of few in the contest. Could I make on suggestion - "red rose blossoms" how about "red rose blooms" That way you keep it in the singular, which way more powerful in a haiku.
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the suggestion, it's a good one, and for the excellent review and kind words.
