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Comment from nancy_e_davis
The best father you ever had showed you the least attention. Did I get that right? You certainly had a difficult childhood. I remember your book Mikey and I enjoyed reading it. I don't know anything about script writing but can add thus offering had very good imagery. Nancy
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The best father you ever had showed you the least attention. Did I get that right? You certainly had a difficult childhood. I remember your book Mikey and I enjoyed reading it. I don't know anything about script writing but can add thus offering had very good imagery. Nancy
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your post. Did you write something similar to this before? My memory, which often plays tricks on me, seems to remember something.
If I would have wanted brats I would've had brats. (comma needed after the first brats)
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I enjoyed reading your post. Did you write something similar to this before? My memory, which often plays tricks on me, seems to remember something.
If I would have wanted brats I would've had brats. (comma needed after the first brats)
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written script and a heartbreaking story. A father figure is not always the best example for a child if the father figure is not interested to be a father figure for a child. Sometimes it cause more damage than good.
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A very well-written script and a heartbreaking story. A father figure is not always the best example for a child if the father figure is not interested to be a father figure for a child. Sometimes it cause more damage than good.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
Comment from Charmisa Parker
I really love this. I think this story is a great reflection that talks about the importance of having a father in your life, no matter what. I don't know where I would be if I didn't have my beloved father in my life. Good job and great work! Five stars! Though I do wish I can rate you more than that...
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I really love this. I think this story is a great reflection that talks about the importance of having a father in your life, no matter what. I don't know where I would be if I didn't have my beloved father in my life. Good job and great work! Five stars! Though I do wish I can rate you more than that...
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
Michael; this is a sad little tale that is all too often the reality for children of a single Mom. Your mother may have been crazy, but she did love you and honestly thought you needed a father-figure. She simply didn't know how to pick one.
Your script read true to life, and I can't say I enjoyed the story, but the writing was sound.
~patty~
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Michael; this is a sad little tale that is all too often the reality for children of a single Mom. Your mother may have been crazy, but she did love you and honestly thought you needed a father-figure. She simply didn't know how to pick one.
Your script read true to life, and I can't say I enjoyed the story, but the writing was sound.
~patty~
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
