Sleeping dog
a lune contest entry20 total reviews
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
I think we could all learn from our pets, a beautiful Lune poem, which paints a wonderful picture of the calmness dogs can project.
And what a lovely photo to accompany your words.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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I think we could all learn from our pets, a beautiful Lune poem, which paints a wonderful picture of the calmness dogs can project.
And what a lovely photo to accompany your words.
Mitchell
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lune poem. It us always amazing to see our pets sleeping so peacefully. We can indeed learn a lot from them about trust and love.
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A very well-written Lune poem. It us always amazing to see our pets sleeping so peacefully. We can indeed learn a lot from them about trust and love.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you
Comment from prettybluebirds
I had to give this one six stars as it is so cute. I think we could all take some lessons on sleeping and love from dogs and cats. LOL Hey, best of luck in the contest. It's sure good to have you back.
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I had to give this one six stars as it is so cute. I think we could all take some lessons on sleeping and love from dogs and cats. LOL Hey, best of luck in the contest. It's sure good to have you back.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Hiya Auntie. Feeling the itch to write again.
Comment from pome lover
don't know which dog you're referring to - both are sleeping and look trusting to me, however I'm guessing you mean the little one.
Both are cute.
neat picture.
both look totally content/ nice way to feel. think I'll go back to bed.
pome lover
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don't know which dog you're referring to - both are sleeping and look trusting to me, however I'm guessing you mean the little one.
Both are cute.
neat picture.
both look totally content/ nice way to feel. think I'll go back to bed.
pome lover
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Poetic Friend
We can all learn something from him. Dogs usually provide unconditional love with their owners. Once they build bonds with their owners, they love them unconditionally, and they openly display that love.
In its brevity, you spoke volumes in your poem. You made every word count with such a challenging poetic form.
Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful week. :)
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We can all learn something from him. Dogs usually provide unconditional love with their owners. Once they build bonds with their owners, they love them unconditionally, and they openly display that love.
In its brevity, you spoke volumes in your poem. You made every word count with such a challenging poetic form.
Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful week. :)
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Nothing like a good dog.
Like this well written poem depicts, there are many things that can be learned from dogs.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
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Nothing like a good dog.
Like this well written poem depicts, there are many things that can be learned from dogs.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
Comment from Possummagic
I enjoyed your Lune poetry. The picture of the dogs lying together companionably is lovely. Your words are strung together nicely. I often find it difficult to review short works, however yours is lovely, and nicely crafted.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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I enjoyed your Lune poetry. The picture of the dogs lying together companionably is lovely. Your words are strung together nicely. I often find it difficult to review short works, however yours is lovely, and nicely crafted.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Have a great weekend.
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You're very welcomec
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Johngie. We could all learn from this beautiful Lune Poetry piece. You have not only given your reader a gorgeous piece of writing but you have presented it nicely as well. Good luck in the contest. xoxo Kiwi
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Hi Johngie. We could all learn from this beautiful Lune Poetry piece. You have not only given your reader a gorgeous piece of writing but you have presented it nicely as well. Good luck in the contest. xoxo Kiwi
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you Kiwi Have a great weekend
Comment from robina1978
This photo and the Lune poem are perfect together. I love any posts about animals. But did it have to be anonymous? I think most of us could learn from them. Best wishes for the contest.
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This photo and the Lune poem are perfect together. I love any posts about animals. But did it have to be anonymous? I think most of us could learn from them. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
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Thank You!!!!! Have a great weekend!!
Comment from papa55mike
This is the dogs life that everybody wants to take a nap whenever you want. I love the big and little of the picture. If humans could only learn to get along that well. This is very well written and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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This is the dogs life that everybody wants to take a nap whenever you want. I love the big and little of the picture. If humans could only learn to get along that well. This is very well written and I love the picture.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you Mike If only I could emulate the dog...