Friendship
Acrostic-Loop46 total reviews
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST
I LIKE WHAT YOU HAVE PENNED
HOPE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WORK
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST
I LIKE WHAT YOU HAVE PENNED
HOPE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WORK
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a fantastic poem on friendship you've penned, my friend. I love acrostic and loop poems, the combination I never was seen, very cool. Good luck. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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This is a fantastic poem on friendship you've penned, my friend. I love acrostic and loop poems, the combination I never was seen, very cool. Good luck. ~Kerry
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much
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Your welcome.
Comment from Sis Cat
Wow, this is a hard combination which you have mastered beautifully--acrostic and loop. I focused more on the loop portion, its message, and repetition, than upon the acrostic of "friendship" that has a supporting role. You keep the poem simple with four or fewer words per line. This makes this challenge achievable and considerable. I cannot pull out any one line because I read your poem all at one time with no breaks.
Thank you for sharing your superb combo poem. I wish you contest success.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Wow, this is a hard combination which you have mastered beautifully--acrostic and loop. I focused more on the loop portion, its message, and repetition, than upon the acrostic of "friendship" that has a supporting role. You keep the poem simple with four or fewer words per line. This makes this challenge achievable and considerable. I cannot pull out any one line because I read your poem all at one time with no breaks.
Thank you for sharing your superb combo poem. I wish you contest success.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
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Comment from Thesis
This is a very encouraging piece of writing. It shows the nurturing philosophy of encouragement, strength, and friendship. This entry shows the need to excel with the backIng of friends and family. Good entry.
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This is a very encouraging piece of writing. It shows the nurturing philosophy of encouragement, strength, and friendship. This entry shows the need to excel with the backIng of friends and family. Good entry.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
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Comment from poetsteve15
a very will done wrap around poem. I like art work you are using, it goes will with the picture. I can find nothing wrong with it at all.
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a very will done wrap around poem. I like art work you are using, it goes will with the picture. I can find nothing wrong with it at all.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
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Comment from apky
What beautiful words you use in this poem.
It brought my mind to what was huge in the
news today about the so-called Dreamers. If
only Americans could be like this poem...
Strength to find hope
Hope for the insight
Insight of the people
People crave friendship
Thanks for posting it, and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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What beautiful words you use in this poem.
It brought my mind to what was huge in the
news today about the so-called Dreamers. If
only Americans could be like this poem...
Strength to find hope
Hope for the insight
Insight of the people
People crave friendship
Thanks for posting it, and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much
Comment from GWHARGIS
Very cool poem. I am new to this particular style. I enjoyed reading it. I like how your poem was balanced. I could see where this style could turn to a circular style. You blended your lines into a pleasing poem. Nicely done. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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Very cool poem. I am new to this particular style. I enjoyed reading it. I like how your poem was balanced. I could see where this style could turn to a circular style. You blended your lines into a pleasing poem. Nicely done. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
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Comment from Pullmanspb
I've always found acrostic-loops to tie peoples' hands. You did a lovely job with a topic (friendship) that is so crucial for our survival and happiness.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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I've always found acrostic-loops to tie peoples' hands. You did a lovely job with a topic (friendship) that is so crucial for our survival and happiness.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
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Comment from Pantygynt
I have always thought that an acrostic needs added spice like rhyme or metre, something to lift it above the level of the mundane. Combining it with another tight form is very clever. As far as the loop is concerned I have alway felt it should complete the analogy and concatenate its tale back into its own mouth to close the circle. That is not a requirement of the form but it has to be an enhancement. If the first line of this read "Friendship is real" it would do that. Just a thought.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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I have always thought that an acrostic needs added spice like rhyme or metre, something to lift it above the level of the mundane. Combining it with another tight form is very clever. As far as the loop is concerned I have alway felt it should complete the analogy and concatenate its tale back into its own mouth to close the circle. That is not a requirement of the form but it has to be an enhancement. If the first line of this read "Friendship is real" it would do that. Just a thought.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much, I re-read this and whole heartedly agree and change to your suggestion many thanks
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
The words slipped in very nicely from line to line, unforced and very smooth. Friendship is all you need to get you through anything. Without a friend, how lonely life would be. This is a great contest entry and I wish you lots of luck in it. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2017
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The words slipped in very nicely from line to line, unforced and very smooth. Friendship is all you need to get you through anything. Without a friend, how lonely life would be. This is a great contest entry and I wish you lots of luck in it. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
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