Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Internet Dating"My book of poems and stories
16 total reviews
Comment from Oatmeal
You did a wonderful job with the challenge that was presented to you. Thoughts are expressed and described well. The flow was good. The theme was excellent!
The descriptive words created wonderful impressions.
There was nothing wrong that I could tell.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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You did a wonderful job with the challenge that was presented to you. Thoughts are expressed and described well. The flow was good. The theme was excellent!
The descriptive words created wonderful impressions.
There was nothing wrong that I could tell.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the review Oatmeal. Yes, it can be very dangerous but infrequently there have been some who have connected with a good partner. Not for me, and I would not recommend it either.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty five word poem. Internet dating is dangerous, the secret is not to go too fast or say too much until you are sure it is a real person with good intentions. Fake ones reveal their intentions within a month.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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A very well-written twenty five word poem. Internet dating is dangerous, the secret is not to go too fast or say too much until you are sure it is a real person with good intentions. Fake ones reveal their intentions within a month.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the review Sandra. Yes, it can be very dangerous but infrequently there have been some who have connected with a good partner. Not for me, and I would not recommend it either.
Comment from Janilou
Interesting concept here. Your author's notes state "Always a deception to go online for a relationship." There is a definite risk, that's for certain, although I do know a couple who met online and have a great relationship, now years in the making.
The poem itself -- I didn't find any errors and I have no suggestions for correction.
The narrator refers to her longing for a relationship as "my foolish dreams" which I found to be sad. Well done for evoking such emotion and thought with just a few brief lines.
Best of luck in the writing prompt contest.
Jan
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Interesting concept here. Your author's notes state "Always a deception to go online for a relationship." There is a definite risk, that's for certain, although I do know a couple who met online and have a great relationship, now years in the making.
The poem itself -- I didn't find any errors and I have no suggestions for correction.
The narrator refers to her longing for a relationship as "my foolish dreams" which I found to be sad. Well done for evoking such emotion and thought with just a few brief lines.
Best of luck in the writing prompt contest.
Jan
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the review Janilou. Yes, it can be very dangerous but infrequently there have been some who have connected with a good partner. Not for me, and I would not recommend it either.
Comment from clsandau
You've got the correct number of words and they are well written. I like how you were even able to rhyme in your little ditty. Great picture and set up as well. From what I understand your words do ring pretty true - online dating?? Good luck to you in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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You've got the correct number of words and they are well written. I like how you were even able to rhyme in your little ditty. Great picture and set up as well. From what I understand your words do ring pretty true - online dating?? Good luck to you in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the review. Yes, it can be very dangerous but infrequently there have been some who have connected with a good partner. Not for me, and I would not recommend it either.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Mystery Author,
You executed this form superbly and spoke volumes.
Although I have never try internet dating, I know people who did, and surprisingly had success. One of my friends married her internet lovers, and they have been together for 11 years.
However, just like anything in the dating world, one must use caution and good judgment.
Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Mystery Author,
You executed this form superbly and spoke volumes.
Although I have never try internet dating, I know people who did, and surprisingly had success. One of my friends married her internet lovers, and they have been together for 11 years.
However, just like anything in the dating world, one must use caution and good judgment.
Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the review Poetic Friend. Yes, it can be very dangerous but infrequently there have been some who have connected with a good partner. Not for me, and I would not recommend it either.
Comment from nbonner
Scary stuff, internet dating. I've never tried it but it seems it would be scary, not knowing who you might meet (serial killer?) (lol) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest, NB
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Scary stuff, internet dating. I've never tried it but it seems it would be scary, not knowing who you might meet (serial killer?) (lol) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest, NB
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the review nbonner. Yes, it can be very dangerous but infrequently there have been some who have connected with a good partner. Not for me, and I would not recommend it either.