We Will Dance
When There Is That...Connection.56 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
You touch me with your laughter and I want to take your pain,
I want to hold you close as we both slow dance in the rain,
I want to know your secret dreams, I want to dry your tears,
I want to have you by my side and put to rest your fears.
So romantic, very sweet and touching. Well done kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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You touch me with your laughter and I want to take your pain,
I want to hold you close as we both slow dance in the rain,
I want to know your secret dreams, I want to dry your tears,
I want to have you by my side and put to rest your fears.
So romantic, very sweet and touching. Well done kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thanks!
Curt
Comment from bob cullen
Everything about this poem is quality. The rhyme is simply delicious. The rhythm flows like a country stream. And the message is delightful. Love is obvious. I can't imagine a more genuine expression of love
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Everything about this poem is quality. The rhyme is simply delicious. The rhythm flows like a country stream. And the message is delightful. Love is obvious. I can't imagine a more genuine expression of love
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thanks Bob, I appreciate that!
Curt
Comment from LIJ Red
Other than possibly making the first stanza second person, I don't see any changes
I would suggest here. No urge to twist this fourteen liner unto a sonnet. Fivers.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Other than possibly making the first stanza second person, I don't see any changes
I would suggest here. No urge to twist this fourteen liner unto a sonnet. Fivers.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thanks!
Curt
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Oh my gosh! Beautifully written. This is the type thing true romantics want to hear IN REAL LIFE. I love the flow of this poem, the length is just right and the last two lines so adequately say what we ALL want when we are in love. A beautiful piece of touching poetry.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Oh my gosh! Beautifully written. This is the type thing true romantics want to hear IN REAL LIFE. I love the flow of this poem, the length is just right and the last two lines so adequately say what we ALL want when we are in love. A beautiful piece of touching poetry.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Wendy,
Your generous gift of stars honors me, as do your thoughts.
Curt
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
My husband came in and got me out of my shell. He broke down my walls to love and showed me that love does exist and is a magical thing. He helped me heal my past and really took on a task that he didn't have to. Us guarded people are the hardest at first but we can be the best
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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My husband came in and got me out of my shell. He broke down my walls to love and showed me that love does exist and is a magical thing. He helped me heal my past and really took on a task that he didn't have to. Us guarded people are the hardest at first but we can be the best
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Amen, to that my friend,
I totally agree. Thank you so much for your thoughts, and for your generous gift of stars!
Curt
Comment from Oatmeal
CURT MONGOLD,
Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. The arrangement is fine, smoothly readable and understandable. The poem flows very nicely. The theme is well chosen.
Everything was clean. Comprehensible and very nicely written.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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CURT MONGOLD,
Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. The arrangement is fine, smoothly readable and understandable. The poem flows very nicely. The theme is well chosen.
Everything was clean. Comprehensible and very nicely written.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you Oatmeal, your thoughts are appreciated.
Curt
Comment from gramalot8
Curt. I loved your poem. I especially liked the following:
and know my soul calls out to yours with feelings I can't hide.
You touch me with your laughter and I want to take your pain,
I want to hold you close as we both slow dance in the rain,
I want to know your secret dreams, I want to dry your tears,
I want to have you by my side and put to rest your fears.
Great message. Thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Curt. I loved your poem. I especially liked the following:
and know my soul calls out to yours with feelings I can't hide.
You touch me with your laughter and I want to take your pain,
I want to hold you close as we both slow dance in the rain,
I want to know your secret dreams, I want to dry your tears,
I want to have you by my side and put to rest your fears.
Great message. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank u!
Curt
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautiful piece of romance poetry dear curt! I think you have successfully conveyed the spirit of love.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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This is a beautiful piece of romance poetry dear curt! I think you have successfully conveyed the spirit of love.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you Rebekka, right back atcha!
Curt
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The last line is m favourite and sums up your poem which is loving and romantic. Great rhyming lines and flow, a joy to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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The last line is m favourite and sums up your poem which is loving and romantic. Great rhyming lines and flow, a joy to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you Dolly!
Curt
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Curt Mongold,
It's a nice piece of Romance Poetry beautifully depicting its theme.
Impressive and matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme.
These lines are especially noteworthy:
"You touch me with your laughter and I want to take your pain,
I want to hold you close as we both slow dance in the rain,
I want to know your secret dreams, I want to dry your tears,
I want to have you by my side and put to rest your fears."
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Hello Curt Mongold,
It's a nice piece of Romance Poetry beautifully depicting its theme.
Impressive and matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme.
These lines are especially noteworthy:
"You touch me with your laughter and I want to take your pain,
I want to hold you close as we both slow dance in the rain,
I want to know your secret dreams, I want to dry your tears,
I want to have you by my side and put to rest your fears."
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you!
Curt
