Love
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Comment from Tim0443
This is a lovely poem, and a good example of loop poetry. Nice picture chosen to accompany. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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This is a lovely poem, and a good example of loop poetry. Nice picture chosen to accompany. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These words are wonderful and heartfelt and mean so much because they are your true feelings and I can feel the love in them, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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These words are wonderful and heartfelt and mean so much because they are your true feelings and I can feel the love in them, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from B.B. Rose
Nice job here with the two different forms and still having solid and special content. A lovely tribute. Glad you got over confusion. Clever that you used imploded the void---good assonance as well as imagery. B.B. Rose
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Nice job here with the two different forms and still having solid and special content. A lovely tribute. Glad you got over confusion. Clever that you used imploded the void---good assonance as well as imagery. B.B. Rose
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Wow, Many Thanks, This review does wonders for Me especially while trying new and different things****kahpot
Comment from okanaganbell
I love your comments...I like your poem. I see what you're trying to say but your lines seem a little disconnected from each other and true love and commitment are far from that...and more like your beautiful comment. So I give you 5 stars for that.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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I love your comments...I like your poem. I see what you're trying to say but your lines seem a little disconnected from each other and true love and commitment are far from that...and more like your beautiful comment. So I give you 5 stars for that.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, And yes I can see what you mean, Many thanks ****kahpot
Comment from lauralumummu
This lovely well-written poem tells us of true love. The vivid imagery tells us that you have found something some people never do. I hope you win the contest. All the best.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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This lovely well-written poem tells us of true love. The vivid imagery tells us that you have found something some people never do. I hope you win the contest. All the best.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You're Welcome!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
wow this is an excellent loop love poem for the contest entry. I love this form it seems to strengthen the piece and each line is dramatically introduced. Very well done
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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wow this is an excellent loop love poem for the contest entry. I love this form it seems to strengthen the piece and each line is dramatically introduced. Very well done
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Liberty Justice
SO BEAUTIFUL, FOR REAL! What powerful statement of how lovers depend on each other's love for survival. So lovely how lovers implode upon each other, as if to become as one. LOVELY! Good luck contest. lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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SO BEAUTIFUL, FOR REAL! What powerful statement of how lovers depend on each other's love for survival. So lovely how lovers implode upon each other, as if to become as one. LOVELY! Good luck contest. lol liberty justice
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is a well written poem for the contest as you combine the loop and acrostic formats so very well Blessings for a wonder filled and joyful week. Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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This is a well written poem for the contest as you combine the loop and acrostic formats so very well Blessings for a wonder filled and joyful week. Patricia
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
A lovely and sweet poem Kahpot, very emotional and beautiful, well done this is outstanding I am so glad you have found love and happiness. Kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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A lovely and sweet poem Kahpot, very emotional and beautiful, well done this is outstanding I am so glad you have found love and happiness. Kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from RGstar
Wish you had written this with more stanzas, but even so, you made a statement, and one of deep love, and sometime, in fact, most of the time, are often stronger than words a plenty.
Good luck.
My very best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Wish you had written this with more stanzas, but even so, you made a statement, and one of deep love, and sometime, in fact, most of the time, are often stronger than words a plenty.
Good luck.
My very best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, I actually wrote this while trying to finish one other ( more Stanzas) hopefully done soon****kahpot
