memory so bad
humorous 5-7-5 contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from Trudi Perkins
Too cute ,I enjoyed this.Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. Short and sweet and to the point. My parents both died of Alzheimer's and I'm a forgetful Nelly myself. Memories are nothing to play with.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Too cute ,I enjoyed this.Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. Short and sweet and to the point. My parents both died of Alzheimer's and I'm a forgetful Nelly myself. Memories are nothing to play with.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you Trudi for the excellent review. Sorry to hear about your parents. I have seen this a few times with relatives. So sad.
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this humorous 5/7/5 poetry contest. I love the theme of this poem, I couldn't stop giggling, these are tough to win, but I think you've done s good job with this, good luck, blessings, Roy
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An excellent entry in this humorous 5/7/5 poetry contest. I love the theme of this poem, I couldn't stop giggling, these are tough to win, but I think you've done s good job with this, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you Roy, I enjoy such challenges. My A.D.D. cause my memory difficulties.
God bless
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Well done
Comment from oliver818
Haha I like that, it is very funny. I hope it's not true though. Memory is the last thing we want to lose, besides our sense of humor. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
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Haha I like that, it is very funny. I hope it's not true though. Memory is the last thing we want to lose, besides our sense of humor. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Well it is to an extent lol. Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
God bless
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks rightly in a voice of confidence, freely and straightforward, memory is so bad, sometimes, it is really, for we wish to hide so many things and perhaps our wrongs or sins; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks rightly in a voice of confidence, freely and straightforward, memory is so bad, sometimes, it is really, for we wish to hide so many things and perhaps our wrongs or sins; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Amen! Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me laugh, hiding your Easter eggs from yourself! How funny, I have hidden chocolate in my fridge so that I don't eat it all though! It must be a geriatric trait! Love Dolly x
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This made me laugh, hiding your Easter eggs from yourself! How funny, I have hidden chocolate in my fridge so that I don't eat it all though! It must be a geriatric trait! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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LOL! It must be Dolly. Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
God bless
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yeah, when you've been labeled as an "Old Fart", you can get away with these sort of things, Anonymous Poet.
Besides, once those lost eggs sit in the sweltering spring and summer sun for awhile, they'll start to stink.
They'll be a piece of cake to find then!
Good luck in your contest.
~Dean
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Yeah, when you've been labeled as an "Old Fart", you can get away with these sort of things, Anonymous Poet.
Besides, once those lost eggs sit in the sweltering spring and summer sun for awhile, they'll start to stink.
They'll be a piece of cake to find then!
Good luck in your contest.
~Dean
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Yes they do Dean! Down right rancid lol. Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
God bless
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Anytime. :)
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Oh goodness! Memory black out new locations for Easter Eggs, what a hoot. I bet that makes it hard to remember what you do every Easter Morning. Are any of them chocolate? she asks hopefully ... Nice start and good luck. xoxo Kiwi
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Oh goodness! Memory black out new locations for Easter Eggs, what a hoot. I bet that makes it hard to remember what you do every Easter Morning. Are any of them chocolate? she asks hopefully ... Nice start and good luck. xoxo Kiwi
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Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Lol! Thank you for the awesome review. There is always chocolate.