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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Kind of the city maybe (King)
Awesome write, my friend. That just might be what it takes to change the world and if nothing else to help us cope with the messed up world we live in. I think your vision of the world is a peaceful one which is not where we are headed at this time. It's time to make a change. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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Kind of the city maybe (King)
Awesome write, my friend. That just might be what it takes to change the world and if nothing else to help us cope with the messed up world we live in. I think your vision of the world is a peaceful one which is not where we are headed at this time. It's time to make a change. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
You have a superb Tom Robbins feel to your writing in this story. The end is coming but as long as there are enough doobies, and I ain't talking about the brothers, we'll be okay.
Kind (King) of the city maybe, but the WORLD
Well see you over there at the half hour, Mav. This is hilarious, but I tend to agree with your assessment of how one only gets to be King when no one else wants the job.
Excellent and enormously funny and good luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
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You have a superb Tom Robbins feel to your writing in this story. The end is coming but as long as there are enough doobies, and I ain't talking about the brothers, we'll be okay.
Kind (King) of the city maybe, but the WORLD
Well see you over there at the half hour, Mav. This is hilarious, but I tend to agree with your assessment of how one only gets to be King when no one else wants the job.
Excellent and enormously funny and good luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
