Autumn's arrival
nature 5-7-5 contest entry47 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
Very creative 5/7/5 poetic offering - especially the last line. Autumn is indeed, a "red carpet affair!"
If I may offer one tiny suggestion, I would employ a tilde (~) after the first two lines to give the offering a satori-like feeling.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Hello!
Very creative 5/7/5 poetic offering - especially the last line. Autumn is indeed, a "red carpet affair!"
If I may offer one tiny suggestion, I would employ a tilde (~) after the first two lines to give the offering a satori-like feeling.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you Diane for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Autumn's Arrival", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Between each line lies the golden threads of truth. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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"Autumn's Arrival", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Between each line lies the golden threads of truth. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you Duchess for this most excellent review. I do love to craft these little guys and hope to get back into the swing of it soon.
God bless
Steve
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Steve, my possum, you deserved the excellent review.
You'll have no trouble getting back into the swing again.
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess
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Awe, thank you
"Awe" yourself!
You're more than welcome.
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from Dawnya
There is such lovely imagery in your poem. Autumn definitely create a beautiful array of colors. Nature can make a real fashion splash with its "red carpet."
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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There is such lovely imagery in your poem. Autumn definitely create a beautiful array of colors. Nature can make a real fashion splash with its "red carpet."
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you Dawnya for taking the time to read my piece and for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from donette1914
simply beautiful on the arrival of autumn
I hope for the best in the contest
I really like the artwork and how creative you are
very well penned and I truly enjoyed your work
thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug 23, 2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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simply beautiful on the arrival of autumn
I hope for the best in the contest
I really like the artwork and how creative you are
very well penned and I truly enjoyed your work
thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug 23, 2018
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you Donette for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Artasylum
What a beautiful image this is... Your 5-7-5 is right on point... good luck in the contest... I think that this is a winner go great good luck in the contest... yours, diana
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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What a beautiful image this is... Your 5-7-5 is right on point... good luck in the contest... I think that this is a winner go great good luck in the contest... yours, diana
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the awesome, supportive review my friend.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Mike J
Not sure if the poem or picture came first, but they fit each other very well. Nice autumn poem, gets you in the mood. Love the last line. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Not sure if the poem or picture came first, but they fit each other very well. Nice autumn poem, gets you in the mood. Love the last line. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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The Poem came first, I searched quite a while for the perfect artwork. Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Ogden
Your excellent 5-7-5 poem, complemented by an outstanding illustration, makes for strong competition in the nature contest.
(I'll be rooting for my own, though.)
Good luck to us both!
Don
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Your excellent 5-7-5 poem, complemented by an outstanding illustration, makes for strong competition in the nature contest.
(I'll be rooting for my own, though.)
Good luck to us both!
Don
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you Don for the awesome review my friend. Which one was yours and how did you fair?
God bless
Steve
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You're very welcome, Steve. It was a worthy piece.
I got lucky, and finished third with 'Unwelcome Company.'
Don
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Awesome!
Comment from Sally Law
This is perfect, I love Autumn. I don't get to see it much unless I travel. Thanks for bringing me this beautiful picture and poetry.
All my best,
Sally
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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This is perfect, I love Autumn. I don't get to see it much unless I travel. Thanks for bringing me this beautiful picture and poetry.
All my best,
Sally
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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I love Autumn as well Sally, thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
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You are welcome! Load us up with more autumnal delights! Sal
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I will ship more out soon lol
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, this is a dramatic and engaging write - the picture a perfect complement to the artistic rendering of the verse - fully compliant with the prompt. Much luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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In my opinion, this is a dramatic and engaging write - the picture a perfect complement to the artistic rendering of the verse - fully compliant with the prompt. Much luck in the contest...
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you Eve for the awesome review my friend.
God bless
Steve
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You are very welcome, Steve...Eve
Comment from dragonpoet
I like the pun/metaphor with red carpet. Autumn colors do sometimes put on an academy award winning performance. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.
Perfect choice for illustration. Was the artwork what inspired the poem?
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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I like the pun/metaphor with red carpet. Autumn colors do sometimes put on an academy award winning performance. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.
Perfect choice for illustration. Was the artwork what inspired the poem?
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you Dragonpoet for this incredible review my friend.
God bless
Steve
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You are so kindly welcome, Steve. Have a great weekend.
Joan
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Same to you Joan.