Descent Into Autumn
Summer's grip is slipping...15 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a scene from Nature, beautifully, echoingly, rhythmically in series, falling leaf parades and greets falling temperature at the same time falling down of snow around, nice imagery fostered, as if descent into autumn is welcoming in feeling; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
  |
This speaks a scene from Nature, beautifully, echoingly, rhythmically in series, falling leaf parades and greets falling temperature at the same time falling down of snow around, nice imagery fostered, as if descent into autumn is welcoming in feeling; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
-
Thanx so much for your review, DR AL CREATOR! :) :) The feedback and your comments are always much appreciated -- have a great evening under the starlight paintings of your imagination! :) :)
Comment from fm wright
I like the ways in which you used falling. The poem itself flowed quite well and the artwork you chose adds a great touch to an already very good poem. A nice read. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
|
I like the ways in which you used falling. The poem itself flowed quite well and the artwork you chose adds a great touch to an already very good poem. A nice read. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
-
Thanx so much for your review, fm! :) :) The feedback and your comments are always much appreciated -- have a great evening under the starlight paintings of your imagination! :) :)
-
I shall, thank you.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is an excellent contest entry. It could also be entered in the repetition poetry contest with the word FALLING appearing in each line. I wonder if you're allowed to enter a poem in two contests.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
|
This is an excellent contest entry. It could also be entered in the repetition poetry contest with the word FALLING appearing in each line. I wonder if you're allowed to enter a poem in two contests.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
-
Thanx so much for your review, Thomas! :) :) The feedback and your comments are always much appreciated, but I'm pretty sure they don't let you do that. :) ;) Have a great evening under the starlight paintings of your imagination! :) :)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
"Heat, heat, go away...don't come back until a new summer's day." :) I like your repeated verse and use of the word "fall." A wonderful nod to autumn. Your title is a great choice. You have a solid entry for the nature contest. Good luck!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
|
"Heat, heat, go away...don't come back until a new summer's day." :) I like your repeated verse and use of the word "fall." A wonderful nod to autumn. Your title is a great choice. You have a solid entry for the nature contest. Good luck!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
-
Indeed! :) ;) Thanx so much for your review, Cindy! :) :) The feedback and your comments are always much appreciated -- have a great evening under the starlight paintings of your imagination! :) :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You and me both, Mystery Author. The heat here is awful. I like the repetition of falling in your poem. Good job on the style of the 575. However line 2 seems to have 8 syllables die to the word tem per a ture. Maybe you could delete cool. lie your picture choice. Best wishes. Jan
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
|
You and me both, Mystery Author. The heat here is awful. I like the repetition of falling in your poem. Good job on the style of the 575. However line 2 seems to have 8 syllables die to the word tem per a ture. Maybe you could delete cool. lie your picture choice. Best wishes. Jan
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
-
Whew! Fixed it, ma'am!! Tell you what, the South is wonderful for lots and lots of things.....that bit of a drawl and leaving out of syllables in our pronunciations? Not so much! :) :) Thank you so very much for catching that for me -- have a wonderful evening under the stars!! :) :)