Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello Anon, this is a very poignant love poem compared to others I have read. I appreciated that, and the essence of the poem is that no matter that the person was rejected, the love stayed strong and didn't change. I don't know if that is what you intended but that is what it said to me. I noticed no errors and found this a pleasure to read and review, cheers, Ana.

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 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

You have it exactly as intended, Ana, which pleases me to no end. Thank you so much for taking the time to give a close read a spend the time to take it in fully. Most appreciated. I'll take this review as my win. Thank you so much. :))

Comment from Flyaway1

Excellent

Loved this little bittersweet thought. Don't we all think it at one time or another. I won't take back the things I said just because you don't have room for me in your life. The heart wants what the heart wants. Rejection doesn't change your truth, only time can heal that hurt.

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 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018

Aww ... thanks so much. That's exactly what I was trying to get across. Big smiles. :))

reply by Flyaway1 on 06-Sep-2018

Well you succeeded