Ode To Autumn
Ode To Autumn Contest Submission30 total reviews
Comment from karenina
It is a beautiful picture...mbut your word painting is equally inspirng!
This is my favorite time of year...the rich colors of leaves as the twirl in the wind...the fresh apple cider...your poem is a valentine to Fall!
Karenina
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It is a beautiful picture...mbut your word painting is equally inspirng!
This is my favorite time of year...the rich colors of leaves as the twirl in the wind...the fresh apple cider...your poem is a valentine to Fall!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like how you've made Autumn come alive and personal by writing about the season using a woman to describe it. Very clever and well thought out.. The artwork is beautiful and spot on. I enjoyed this well written offering. You should do well in the contest. Well done!
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I like how you've made Autumn come alive and personal by writing about the season using a woman to describe it. Very clever and well thought out.. The artwork is beautiful and spot on. I enjoyed this well written offering. You should do well in the contest. Well done!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Aries Poet
What a beautiful poem of Autumn, this season brings us such beautiful vibrant colors of gold, browns and reds. The picture you chose is just beautiful, it depicts your poem perfectly!
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What a beautiful poem of Autumn, this season brings us such beautiful vibrant colors of gold, browns and reds. The picture you chose is just beautiful, it depicts your poem perfectly!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Wow, what a great picture of a true crown of leaves to accompany this delightful poem about Autumn. Nice job! ~Kerry
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Wow, what a great picture of a true crown of leaves to accompany this delightful poem about Autumn. Nice job! ~Kerry
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer
So lovely. The visual imagery plays to the reader's imagination. Creative and delightful to read and enjoy. I wonder if children today still learn of Jack Frost? When I was a child, my sister would taunt me that Jack Frost was coming during the nights in October and November. As we lived across from a century old cemetery, you can imagine I was more than afraid whenever I heard his name mentioned! Too funny!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Hello Mystery Writer
So lovely. The visual imagery plays to the reader's imagination. Creative and delightful to read and enjoy. I wonder if children today still learn of Jack Frost? When I was a child, my sister would taunt me that Jack Frost was coming during the nights in October and November. As we lived across from a century old cemetery, you can imagine I was more than afraid whenever I heard his name mentioned! Too funny!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Shanbreen
This is a well-written poem within the constraints of the contest. Although it 's 5-7-5 poem, your last line, "Jack Frost rejoices" gives it the characteristics of a Haiku. Well done. All the best for the contest.
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This is a well-written poem within the constraints of the contest. Although it 's 5-7-5 poem, your last line, "Jack Frost rejoices" gives it the characteristics of a Haiku. Well done. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from fm wright
A beautifully written entry for the 5-7-4 ode to autumn contest. A wonderful personification of this season. It also has a nice flow of thought. I wish you only the best with this poem in the contest.
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A beautifully written entry for the 5-7-4 ode to autumn contest. A wonderful personification of this season. It also has a nice flow of thought. I wish you only the best with this poem in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, this is a gorgeous presentation, even though the last line doesn't quite fit the poem's theme. In my humble opinion, the poem should conclude with a line about the gorgeous Autumn reference, for example, with this writer's permission and indulgence, " colorful for all" - or - "shine and color glow" - just suggestions. I'm sure you can do better...
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In my opinion, this is a gorgeous presentation, even though the last line doesn't quite fit the poem's theme. In my humble opinion, the poem should conclude with a line about the gorgeous Autumn reference, for example, with this writer's permission and indulgence, " colorful for all" - or - "shine and color glow" - just suggestions. I'm sure you can do better...
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
Beautiful personification of such a rapturous season, and this is brought to life even more boldly with the stunning image accompanying it. Autumn has such gorgeous colours and i agree that she would be very regal and fabulous indeed if she were a person and would capture jack frosts heart. Great ode, good luck x
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Beautiful personification of such a rapturous season, and this is brought to life even more boldly with the stunning image accompanying it. Autumn has such gorgeous colours and i agree that she would be very regal and fabulous indeed if she were a person and would capture jack frosts heart. Great ode, good luck x
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Boogienights
This is a very nice submission for the contest. Don't you love the colors of fall? I like the picture you chose, it fits perfectly with the theme of your piece. This is my favorite time of year, with the sights and smells , the cooler weather. Thanks for sharing.
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This is a very nice submission for the contest. Don't you love the colors of fall? I like the picture you chose, it fits perfectly with the theme of your piece. This is my favorite time of year, with the sights and smells , the cooler weather. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
