Lead Detective Case 2 part 1
Lead Detective gets his second case19 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a startling read with the gruesome facts displayed so prominently. And it's in two parts too. It is definitely a poem that grabs your attention to the end. All the best. Melissa
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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This is a startling read with the gruesome facts displayed so prominently. And it's in two parts too. It is definitely a poem that grabs your attention to the end. All the best. Melissa
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Probably, new installments will be posted on Sundays. Thanks for the great review
Comment from Boogienights
I can't wait to see what happens next! I love a good murder mystery, I hope that doesn't make me sound weird. A very interesting and well written poem. Hurry and write the second installment. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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I can't wait to see what happens next! I love a good murder mystery, I hope that doesn't make me sound weird. A very interesting and well written poem. Hurry and write the second installment. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Sunday, my dear. I will post new installments on Sundays until it is done. Thank you for a wonderful review
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very good and interesting poem about a crime scene. Have you been watching Law and order SVU? I love that programme. Well done. Best wishes.Jen.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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This is a very good and interesting poem about a crime scene. Have you been watching Law and order SVU? I love that programme. Well done. Best wishes.Jen.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thank you Jen for your splendid review
Comment from Mitchell Brontë
Well this took me by surprise Pam, an intriguing and very interesting 'case' poem.
You have given an excellent picture of the crime scene and written it with such detail.
Great rhyming throughout
Mitchell
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Well this took me by surprise Pam, an intriguing and very interesting 'case' poem.
You have given an excellent picture of the crime scene and written it with such detail.
Great rhyming throughout
Mitchell
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thank you Mitchell. Part 2 coming on Sunday. Thanks for the splendid review
Comment from kahpot
What an intriguing poem and story, you have certainly left us wanting more, I like the way you describe the detectives thought process and relaying it to the reader , very well written and I look forward to the next read****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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What an intriguing poem and story, you have certainly left us wanting more, I like the way you describe the detectives thought process and relaying it to the reader , very well written and I look forward to the next read****kahpot
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Sunday, I will post part 2. Thanks for the great review
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting way to tell a detective story in verse! I think you might want to try a flash fiction. But I know you prefer to speak in poetry so that's fine, too. Will see how it turns out soon.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Interesting way to tell a detective story in verse! I think you might want to try a flash fiction. But I know you prefer to speak in poetry so that's fine, too. Will see how it turns out soon.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thank you Helen for your lovely review I appreciate it
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I don't know what I have ever seen a poem about a kidnap/murder, but I'm sure there are some. This is very well done giving a complete story of what happened to the poor victim. Looking forward to part 2. Rox
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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I don't know what I have ever seen a poem about a kidnap/murder, but I'm sure there are some. This is very well done giving a complete story of what happened to the poor victim. Looking forward to part 2. Rox
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thank you Roxanna for your lovely review. Nice to see you tonight
Comment from meeshu
hey, this is great, Pam. is it recent? a detective novel in rhyme, very unique idea. the gory details in verse is a little unnerving on its own. really great piece.............meeshu
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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hey, this is great, Pam. is it recent? a detective novel in rhyme, very unique idea. the gory details in verse is a little unnerving on its own. really great piece.............meeshu
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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I wrote it last week meeshu. Thank you for a wonderful review
Comment from Gloria ....
Pam you are always full of wonderful surprises. What a most cool idea to write a detective murder/mystery poem. And yes doing it in segments is exactly the right way to go about it.
I not only followed your lovely metre and rhyme, but also remember.
Very cool indeed. :)
Gloria
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Pam you are always full of wonderful surprises. What a most cool idea to write a detective murder/mystery poem. And yes doing it in segments is exactly the right way to go about it.
I not only followed your lovely metre and rhyme, but also remember.
Very cool indeed. :)
Gloria
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thank you Gloria for another lovely review
