Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

OH MY!! You are piecing this together beautifully. I am really enjoying reading this story. I am trying to figure out exactly what the thing was that changed history. I WILL!!! LOL

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

What a lovely review, Barbara, thank you so much! It doesn't take much to change the future, I have to be so careful when I step back into the past! LOL. Yes, you will figure it out ... but not until I tell you!! LOL!! The second part of this chapter will be posted on Sunday. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from BlueTiger

Excellent

Great work on this chapter. It's a nice transition from the last chapter into this one, and the pacing is good throughout. You also do a good job of keeping Mildred's speaking style consistent, which can be hard to do. Looking forward to the next post!

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, Blue Tiger, for this this lovely review. I've got so used to Mildred after first two books that it comes naturally now. I'm so pleased you thought it was. I'll be posting the second half of this on Sunday. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great chapter, Sandra. Several important details are revealed and others seem like they will be useful to further the story. It is interesting to think that history has been changed. Perhaps the two women will travel back to fix the things that changed so the history will be as we know it. I found no nits. The dialect is interesting and a fun addition to the story. I enjoyed reading this and look forward to more. Thanks for sharing. Jan

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, Jan, for another of your lovely reviews. I really appreciate your thoughts on each part. The second half of this chapter will be posted on Sunday. It was much to long to post in one part. I'm really pleased you are enjoying this story. Thanks again, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is a good continuation of your story, Sandra. I very interested in how you are able to take your story back and start again and again.... you have so many tales that can be told and all you have to do is rewind through time travel.... a very clever way to write all of your ideas for these characters. Well done.

Melissa

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, Melissa. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. I've had fun writing these books, and this one has been the most challenging, but that's what I've enjoyed most. I'm really pleased you are enjoying it. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from JDRBAR

Exceptional

As you may remember (or not), I never read your first book of the trilogy. Thanks to this chapter, I now understand a lot that was confusing me before. Well written to my great appreciation.

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, Diane, for the lovely six stars. I really appreciate them and the lovely review. Yes, it would make more sense, this is going to be the final book, so it's like coming full circle bringing the original setting and characters into it. Now, Veronica must sort it out. Big hugs, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from apky

Excellent

You are amazing with this story, Sandra Mitchell. Clearly, this is a genre you excel in because your way of handling it is so unique - I never read anything like it.


I could really feel with Veronica struggling to get on with things but without James and the children. I've come to love these characters so much that they are real to me and I suffer with them, root for them and rejoice with them. Now, if that's not the highest quality of a storyteller, what could be?

BTW, how are you doing with Khira and Erik? Just curious.

Hugs,
Aki

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, Aki for this really lovely review. I love that you like my characters, and root for them. lol. I'll miss them when I've finished this last book. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

I'm so pleased you asked me about dear Khira, I finished the book a while ago and forgot to put the review up. I've done it now. It had to be written on Amazon.uk from I bought it, as it won't let me put one on the .com site. So annoying. It's an amazing story, Aki, you must be so proud. You have a talent way above many other authors I've read over the years. You should be so proud. :)) xx

Ps, I'll be buying the 2nd book in the series soon. :))

reply by apky on 30-Nov-2018

Thanks so much for the review, dear Sandra. This series won me writer of the year award in Amsterdam, Holland. I love Khira and Eric. But now, I've muddied their water a bit with Golden Shana, the love story of their youngest daughter Svadishana. So naughty of me, Khira would kill me. But I wanted to try the erotic genre. In any case I didn't make it hardcore. No BDSM and all those crazy things, just a bit of graphic hot sex, lol!

Hugs back,
Aki

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Wow! Congratulations for that!! I'll be getting the second book later. I want to get it to read when I can sit down and just read. I hate putting books down once I've started! If the second book is as good as the first, I know I'll love it. :))

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

And the story goes on, with Mildred.
I can see why this received awards, for there is no getting away from good writing and confidence in own ability to write without hinder.
It reflects here, even though, like I have previously said, have not followed this so much. This is why, whatever I say will never be enough.
Yet, know that I value, and wish you good luck with this section of works.
My best wishes.
RG

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Thank you very much, RG, that is so kind of you. I really appreciate you coming along and reading this part and giving me your thoughts. And thank you for the good luck wishes for my work! :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Sandra
What a great chapter to read, I really like how "Mildred, asked Miss Veronica (am I right it was Veronica?) questions of what happened in the past of what really happened, which I found
very interesting ,
Will be waiting for your next chapter. Gert

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Aw, thank you, Gert. Veronica and Mildred have a few things to sort out, and Veronica really needs to get back to her own time and be with her husband and children. But, how? Next part coming on Sunday. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part, my friend, thank you! :) Sandra xx

reply by Gert sherwood on 29-Nov-2018

You are welcome sandramitchell
Gert

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Sandra, Da Sha Vu....sweet girl...think I've been here before...poor Mildred...her and I will have to stock up on tea...and crumpet's...or a good bottle of Jack Daniels...LOL...and it sounds like...the powers that be might want to join us...LOL...all we can do is sit back and wait...your not real good at giving hints...LOL...this is really a great chapter my soooo sweet friend...a little Exercist like...my head is spinning around...but I love the mystery of it....very well written you...love you so lots...smiling big...Linda xxoo

say Hi to Ian for me...xxoo

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

LOL!! You lovely lady. I'll post the 2nd half of this on Sunday, it might help sort out some of the confusion. Tea and crumpets! Oh, Linda they are my favorite, well almost, Cornish cream tea's are delicious, that's the freshly baked scones, with Cornish clotted cream and a good dollop of strawberry jam on top! To die for!!!

The story is getting to the part where everyone will have that 'Ahhhhhhh I get it now!' moment, LOL. Even me!! Thanks so much dear lady! Love you lots, and more hugs for you and Noah. I bet he's getting excited now Christmas is almost on us. :)) Sandra xxx

reply by l.raven on 28-Nov-2018

LOL...my girlfriend (Donatta) bakes scones...her family loves them...I don't know if this is just how she makes them or not...but they aren't sweet...of course...I guess if you throw a half of jar of strawberry jam on them...they could be...LOL...can't wait till Sunday...and you sweet girl....are always soooooo very welcome...love to you so much...xxoo

Comment from damommy

Excellent

This is certainly a strange turn of events. Interesting, though. Now to see just how this all works out. Those Power That Be need to get on the ball. I can't imagine how afraid Veronica must be of never getting back to her own time.

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Thank you, Yvonne. Yes, they do! Veronica is in a frightening place, the year is right but everything else is wrong. She has loads of questions, but can Mildred give her the answers she needs? Hmm. Thanks again, my friend, for your constant support, I really appreciate you. Big hugs, Sandra xxxx