Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written flash fiction story about how the little helpful child Timmy uses his mother's toothbrush to clean the potty and tells her about it just when she finished brushing her teeth.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019

Thank you, Sandra, for taking the time to read and write a review for my story. I appreciate your kind comments, and I'm delighted you enjoyed it.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from estory

Excellent

Nice punch line. I liked how you built it up, set the stage, and then when it was in motion, you sprung the joke. Well I guess anyone with kids can relate to this, the moments of innocence when they need a lesson in moving on to the next level of living, through no fault of their own. The toothbrush seems like a good cleaning tool, I guess LOL estory

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019

Thank you, estory, for taking the time to read and write a review for my story. I appreciate your kind comments, and I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Loved your great response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there,

Thank you for sharing this little story - I think. I felt my stomach turn over a few times as I digested the last lines. Oh my goodness - why didn't the kid use his own toothbrush?

Well done and I wish you luck in the contest,

~Mustang Patty~

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019

Mom's brush is bigger than a kid's brush. LOL Thank you, Mustang Patty, for taking the time to read and write a review for my story. I appreciate your kind comments and response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This story did make me giggle. I liked the picture as well. The whole story was very comical and a lot of mother's will relate, I know I did lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019

Thank you, dmt, for taking the time to read and write a review for my story. I appreciate your kind comments, and I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Your giggle is the best compliment you can give the story.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from humpwhistle

Exceptional

Well, one more reason to skip brushing your teeth.
Or, a really good reason to spit a lot.
Hard to imagine worse news. On the other hand, the toilet is clean.

Best of Luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019

Thanks for your great review and comments for my little story, hw. I'm thinking Timmy's Mom needs to jump in here and give him the right brush if he wants to be a helper. Thanks for the extra star, hw. You're the best!
Smiles,
Indy :-)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

If I were a bettin' man, and I'm not, I'd bet that "Mommy" will be purchasing some new toothbrushes in the very near future, heh-heh.
At least Timmy tried to help. That's more than you can get most kids to do these days.
Cute 100 word story.
Good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019

I think Mommy will also be putting her toothbrush where Timmy can't get his helpful little hands on it.
Thanks for your review and comments, Dean

reply by Dean Kuch on 21-Jan-2019

Yeah. That'd be a good idea.
You're welcome.

Comment from SLMorrical

Excellent

This is so cute. The child wanting to help his mom is so sweet. Him using the toothbrush is funny. I'm sure his mom didn't think so. This is very well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019

Thank you very much for your kind review and comments for my story, SLMorricat.
I appreciate your time to read and I'm delighted you found it a funny story.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job with your story for the contest, Mystery Author. But eeew! Yuck! You told a good little story in 100 words as required. The picture is a nice pairing. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019

Thank you very much for your kind review and comments for my story, Jan.
I appreciate your time to read and I'm delighted you enjoyed.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Eee-YUCK>Timmy is one dumb bunny. (LOL) Although, to be fair, he does sound very young. I refer, of course, to your rather convincing dialogue, and "mostest".

Then again, maybe he's just angry with his mommy. :)) (kidding)

Good one. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019

Thank you very much for your kind review and comments for my story, Dawn
I appreciate your time to read and I'm delighted you enjoyed.

reply by Dawn Munro on 21-Jan-2019

You're very welcome.

Comment from TheStoryMan

Excellent

Oh Timmy is such a helpful little tyke...if only he knew how to do it properly. This was really well written. There were no spelling or grammar errors and no typos. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019

Thank you, TheStoryMan, for your time to read and write a review for my little story.
I truly apprecite your kind omments in response to the story.Thanks!