Comment from Tootie

Excellent

So very well written and a great presentation. I enjoyed your notes as well. Flowed well and the poem gives the feeling of calmness through the storm. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Cathy

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019

Thank you Cathy. I think we can all feel the peace of spiritual well-being when we connect with something greater than ourselves.... it might be Nature to some or the peace of the Almighty.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

This is a very lovely, heartfelt spiritual poem, Lisa May.
I rarely feel closer to the Almighty than when I am staring up into a sky filled with billions upon billions of twinkling stars.
So, you see, there IS beauty in darkness as well as light.
Well done...

~Dean


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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019

Thanks Dean... yes I agree about the darkness as a nourishing source to accentuate the light.
I adore camping in a remote area with no urban light spill (we have lots of those places in NZ).
It is incredible how busy the sky is!! It is almost overwhelming to ponder the magnitude of space.