Woast Wabbit
Ghost Poem contest entry24 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
I woved this. I fear that makes me as cwazy as you. This weally is a cwever piece of cweative wwiting. And it was fun and entertaining. I would wike to see more humour on the site. It weally deserved the sixth star. Thank you for bwightening my night.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I woved this. I fear that makes me as cwazy as you. This weally is a cwever piece of cweative wwiting. And it was fun and entertaining. I would wike to see more humour on the site. It weally deserved the sixth star. Thank you for bwightening my night.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic humorous review, Bob. Yes, there should be a lot more humor on this site. I can't agree with that more. I really appreciate the generous sixer, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This one must have a 6. This skillfully-written, REALLY creative narrative
piece tells a great story and moves along at a rollicking speed. Great
accomplishment!
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This one must have a 6. This skillfully-written, REALLY creative narrative
piece tells a great story and moves along at a rollicking speed. Great
accomplishment!
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you so much for the great review and huge sixer, Janice. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
This is better than six stars, it deserves about twelve. How in the world did you come up with such a screwy and fantastic poem. The word dictionary at the end deserves six stars by itself. I have used all my
sixes. This is exceptional in every way.
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This is better than six stars, it deserves about twelve. How in the world did you come up with such a screwy and fantastic poem. The word dictionary at the end deserves six stars by itself. I have used all my
sixes. This is exceptional in every way.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the generous star offer, Willie. I always try to come up with the most ridiculous thing I can think of when coming to these contests. This came to mind so I just rolled with it. Lol. I had fun with the contest. Thank you for creating it and again for the excellent review. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous scary poem. To see a ghost, especially when you are guilty of something you did and know you should not do.
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A very well-written humorous scary poem. To see a ghost, especially when you are guilty of something you did and know you should not do.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Mark D. R.
This is truly ingenious. So clever. Now as an adult, I can understand your words without the glossary you provided. As a kid, I sometimes had a problem understanding his spoken words!
Rhymes are spot on!
You likely can reduce your glossary by a few since you gave us the substitutions for r and l. Pat on the back for your created image!
This will get great FS reviews and likely will do super in the voting in the 'ghost poem' contest.
Mark
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This is truly ingenious. So clever. Now as an adult, I can understand your words without the glossary you provided. As a kid, I sometimes had a problem understanding his spoken words!
Rhymes are spot on!
You likely can reduce your glossary by a few since you gave us the substitutions for r and l. Pat on the back for your created image!
This will get great FS reviews and likely will do super in the voting in the 'ghost poem' contest.
Mark
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Mark. Even though I put that in the author notes, I know there would be someone out there who, for some odd reason, didn't get it. Lol. So I had to add the references. I really appreciate the generous rating, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great weekend. Thank you again.
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More than welcome !
Comment from LyndaS
Vewy, vewy excewent! Lord, what an effort! You did enough work here for two poets. This was so easy to read with all of the impaired English in it. It flows very well and the story is great. Wabid Wabbit! Ha! An amazing job. You also created the picture? Your creative talent knows no limits. A killer ghost poem for your contest. I'd wish you good luck but I think I just reviewed the winner. Outstanding!! Lynda
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Vewy, vewy excewent! Lord, what an effort! You did enough work here for two poets. This was so easy to read with all of the impaired English in it. It flows very well and the story is great. Wabid Wabbit! Ha! An amazing job. You also created the picture? Your creative talent knows no limits. A killer ghost poem for your contest. I'd wish you good luck but I think I just reviewed the winner. Outstanding!! Lynda
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and the massive sixer, Lynda. Yes, I use my art program to come up with a lot of my pictures. I have about much fun doing that as writing these silly things. Lol. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and good luck wishes, Lynda. I'm glad you liked my odd offering. Thank you again.
Comment from Earl Corp
I'm glad I saved this six star rating for this one. Anybody who can write in the style of Elmer Fudd certainly deserves a six. This is a winning poem in my book anf you have my vote. Good luck in the contest.
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I'm glad I saved this six star rating for this one. Anybody who can write in the style of Elmer Fudd certainly deserves a six. This is a winning poem in my book anf you have my vote. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and for using your last sixer on this silliness, Earl. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked my little ghost tale. Have a great weekend and thank you again.
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Well, now, you did a brilliant job imitating the way Elmer Fudd speaks. He and Bugs were my favorite cartoon characters as a kid. And to think you had Elmer kill and eat Bugs! Are you kidding? Elmer deserves to die. LOL
Well done.
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Well, now, you did a brilliant job imitating the way Elmer Fudd speaks. He and Bugs were my favorite cartoon characters as a kid. And to think you had Elmer kill and eat Bugs! Are you kidding? Elmer deserves to die. LOL
Well done.
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Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review and four stars, Sandra. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Bill Pinder
You knocked that one out of the park! I am a Bugs Bunny fan and a fan of weird humor. You should win the contest! Good luck! That took some work changing all those words to Fuddese.
Bill
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You knocked that one out of the park! I am a Bugs Bunny fan and a fan of weird humor. You should win the contest! Good luck! That took some work changing all those words to Fuddese.
Bill
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Fuddese. Hahaha. Thank you for the fantastic review and the huge sixer, Bill. Yeah, I'm a big fan of twisted humor too. You don't find much of that on here, that's for sure. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. Have a great weekend. Thank you again.
Comment from LisaMay
This has got Winner written all over it... clever and silly enough to charm and delight me. You had me when you cwapped your pants, I nearly cwapped mine laughing.
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This has got Winner written all over it... clever and silly enough to charm and delight me. You had me when you cwapped your pants, I nearly cwapped mine laughing.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Lol, yeah, that one of my favorite lines too. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Lisa. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Thank you again.