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Cool, man...13 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Joseph star poem. At this very moment I would like something hot to drink instead of an ice cold drink that shows in the picture.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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A very well-written Joseph star poem. At this very moment I would like something hot to drink instead of an ice cold drink that shows in the picture.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Sandra!
Comment from Brian Taylor1
Good write. Very interesting and stimulating from a creative point. I like how lines 1 and 8, 2 and 7, 3 and 6, 4 and 5 all had their own unique connection within the overall poem. A two for one. Great timing to with the picture be it summers about to come knocking. Very enjoyable read and think. Keep writin
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Good write. Very interesting and stimulating from a creative point. I like how lines 1 and 8, 2 and 7, 3 and 6, 4 and 5 all had their own unique connection within the overall poem. A two for one. Great timing to with the picture be it summers about to come knocking. Very enjoyable read and think. Keep writin
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Brian!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the Joseph's Star contest
with excellent use of alliteration and imagery.
I like the connection between the first and last words
as well as the lines in-between.
Perfect time for the theme, too.
Well done
Good luck in the contest and the heat
Robert
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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You've written an excellent poem for the Joseph's Star contest
with excellent use of alliteration and imagery.
I like the connection between the first and last words
as well as the lines in-between.
Perfect time for the theme, too.
Well done
Good luck in the contest and the heat
Robert
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Robert! Looks inviting right about now, as the temperature approaches 80.
