Achievement:Intensity of CAN!
Yea, I CAN, such say-er succeeds...53 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
Hi, R P. Long time between posts, my friend. Nevertheless this is a very exceptional entry in the "I can" contest I wish you the best of luck with this piece. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Hi, R P. Long time between posts, my friend. Nevertheless this is a very exceptional entry in the "I can" contest I wish you the best of luck with this piece. : ) Bob
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2019
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Hello Bob,
Thank you very much for you so LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS backed by Best of Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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: ) Bob
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: ) Bob
Comment from Coco Jane
Good advice about positivity and believing in ourselves!
In stanza 2, line 2 should say "leads us" (to agree with "rays").
We all need to be reminded to focus on what we can, with God's help, accomplish.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Good advice about positivity and believing in ourselves!
In stanza 2, line 2 should say "leads us" (to agree with "rays").
We all need to be reminded to focus on what we can, with God's help, accomplish.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello Coco Jane,
Thank you very much for your so NICE, LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Sorry I forgot to put the stars on. Usually the site reminds us to do that. I have updated the post to show five stars.
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Thank you, Coco Jane.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO RPSAXENA: You've said it all here. At my best...I can only paraphrase you. "I can do all things through Christ who gives me the power to do so." Thank you for sharing, my friend. God bless you. Cordially:rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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HELLO RPSAXENA: You've said it all here. At my best...I can only paraphrase you. "I can do all things through Christ who gives me the power to do so." Thank you for sharing, my friend. God bless you. Cordially:rhonnie69.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello Rhonnie69,
Thank you very much for your so NICE, LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS backed by Blessings.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Ross E Silke
I think everyone should read this! It's a great motivator and nicely written with a good font choice that is bold and I love the picture!--It hooked me. Great motivational read! Excellent presentation! I'd like to reward this based on its effectiveness to help one think positive and have great faith. It truly inspired me today!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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I think everyone should read this! It's a great motivator and nicely written with a good font choice that is bold and I love the picture!--It hooked me. Great motivational read! Excellent presentation! I'd like to reward this based on its effectiveness to help one think positive and have great faith. It truly inspired me today!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello Ross E Silke,
WOW!
What a WONDERFUL REVIEW this is!
Thank you very much for your so NICE, LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS backed by most coveted SIX STARS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a clever idea that relies for its poetry principally on some interesting slant rhymes, that follow an abab pattern through each quatrain. Had it been accompanied by a more rhythmic flow I would have liked it better.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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This is a clever idea that relies for its poetry principally on some interesting slant rhymes, that follow an abab pattern through each quatrain. Had it been accompanied by a more rhythmic flow I would have liked it better.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello Pantygynt,
Thank you very much for your so NICE, LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Once we have convinced ourselves that we can do something, it usually follows that we do. If we have negative thoughts, we won't achieve anything. This is an excellent poem for the 'I Can' contest, well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Once we have convinced ourselves that we can do something, it usually follows that we do. If we have negative thoughts, we won't achieve anything. This is an excellent poem for the 'I Can' contest, well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello Sandramitchell,
Thank you very much for your so NICE, LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS backed by Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Achievement:Intensity of CAN!, reminds us that if we say we can or if we say we can't, we're right. CAN leads to WILL. DID then leads to CAN and WILL again.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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This poem, Achievement:Intensity of CAN!, reminds us that if we say we can or if we say we can't, we're right. CAN leads to WILL. DID then leads to CAN and WILL again.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello Bill Schott,
Thank you very much for your so NICE, LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Yes those with the "I Can" genes do make it and do leave a trail which is usually followed by others. Your positive portrayal is definitely a great message for those sitting on the fence of "yea" or "nay".
thanks for sharing the good feeling of the "I Cans"
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Yes those with the "I Can" genes do make it and do leave a trail which is usually followed by others. Your positive portrayal is definitely a great message for those sitting on the fence of "yea" or "nay".
thanks for sharing the good feeling of the "I Cans"
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello Raffaelina Lowcock,
Thank you very much for your so NICE, LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello and a happy Tuesday to you. I enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for sharing. I liked the rhythm and rhyme of the poem. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello and a happy Tuesday to you. I enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for sharing. I liked the rhythm and rhyme of the poem. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello the13thpoet,
Thank you very much for your so NICE, LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Sanku
This is a very good entry for the contest .It is a motivational poen that stresses the force of "I can".Faith in God and faith in us can ultimately lead us to success.All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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This is a very good entry for the contest .It is a motivational poen that stresses the force of "I can".Faith in God and faith in us can ultimately lead us to success.All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
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Hello Sanku,
Thank you very much for your so NICE, LOVELY, and MORALE BOOSTING WORDS backed by good wishes for the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
