Senryu (dreadful foggy eve)
Senryu contest entry20 total reviews
Comment from Ogden
I love that satori,Neonewman!
The illustration, too, especially if that fishwife is the wife of your father-in-law.
I hope you fared well in the contest.
Don
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I love that satori,Neonewman!
The illustration, too, especially if that fishwife is the wife of your father-in-law.
I hope you fared well in the contest.
Don
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Don, for the awesome review. My ex-mother in law was a beast. So I was lucky to find a pic that would come close to her lol.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Oh my. You're painting a frightening picture here. Hopefully, most people get along with the inlaws. I know that this isn't always the case. Sometimes, you've done all you can do to get along with them, but, you're just not good enough in there eyes for there little girl/boy. What do you do about that? Well, you just hang in there and keep proving them wrong. At least you don't have to live with them, or do you? I enjoyed this humorous and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Oh my. You're painting a frightening picture here. Hopefully, most people get along with the inlaws. I know that this isn't always the case. Sometimes, you've done all you can do to get along with them, but, you're just not good enough in there eyes for there little girl/boy. What do you do about that? Well, you just hang in there and keep proving them wrong. At least you don't have to live with them, or do you? I enjoyed this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Not all of them are worthy to be in-laws lol. Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yea that evil eye is frightening as you open the door to the unexpected in-law visit.
Funny entry for this contest. Your selected illustration is perfectly matched to your idea.
I can easily live with your 'foggy eve' but IMHO it could be morphed into something different if your used an adjective to describe 'eye'! LOL
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Yea that evil eye is frightening as you open the door to the unexpected in-law visit.
Funny entry for this contest. Your selected illustration is perfectly matched to your idea.
I can easily live with your 'foggy eve' but IMHO it could be morphed into something different if your used an adjective to describe 'eye'! LOL
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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LOL
Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from persevere
This senyru cleverly encompasses feelings that sometimes exist between a daughter and her mother-in-law. The accompanying illustration says it all, j
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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This senyru cleverly encompasses feelings that sometimes exist between a daughter and her mother-in-law. The accompanying illustration says it all, j
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you persevere for this wonderful review my friend.
God bless
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello again, hope your Monday has started off right. Good luck with the writing prompt contest. That picture is a bit scary, if those were my in-laws I would definitely be feeling dread and terror for sure. Good job.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hello again, hope your Monday has started off right. Good luck with the writing prompt contest. That picture is a bit scary, if those were my in-laws I would definitely be feeling dread and terror for sure. Good job.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Lol, thank you for the awesome review, my friend. My Monday has started off great with all the kind reviews.
God bless
Comment from Sanku
Oh! this is quite funny. the poem is in correct syllable count and it has included human emotions too. a foggy evening is dreadful and especially whennthe in laws are in town.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Oh! this is quite funny. the poem is in correct syllable count and it has included human emotions too. a foggy evening is dreadful and especially whennthe in laws are in town.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the awesome review. Foggy evenings can be a bit scary, but my ex-mother in law was scarier lol.
God bless
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a scary picture, an animated Mother-in-law on the loose! He he he, I enjoyed the sarcasm in your few words, much fun here . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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This is a scary picture, an animated Mother-in-law on the loose! He he he, I enjoyed the sarcasm in your few words, much fun here . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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LOL! Thank you for the awesome review. My ex-mother in law was truly a beast.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu about the dreadful situation about the terror that comes around when the in-laws come to town, there is no peace to find for a while.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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A very well-written Senryu about the dreadful situation about the terror that comes around when the in-laws come to town, there is no peace to find for a while.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Total truth Sandra. Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Comment from royowen
I found this very amusing, an excellent entry in this Senryu poetry contest. This is an excellent theme. And a very witty post, you've done well, good post, good luck, blessngs, Roy
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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I found this very amusing, an excellent entry in this Senryu poetry contest. This is an excellent theme. And a very witty post, you've done well, good post, good luck, blessngs, Roy
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you, Roy, for the awesome review my friend. My ex-mother in law was a real beast for sure lol.
God bless
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Well done
Comment from JanPerry
This is full of fun. There's nothing like poking fun at your in-laws.
The picture enhances your idea of a dreadful,foggy evening when these people show up on your doorstep wanting in!
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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This is full of fun. There's nothing like poking fun at your in-laws.
The picture enhances your idea of a dreadful,foggy evening when these people show up on your doorstep wanting in!
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Right! Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless