Mystery
a mystery16 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yes, it is so much fun to write in the sand one's feelings that may be washed away in seconds. Methinks your short contest entry does that.
Thanks for the artwork that reinforces that feeling.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Yes, it is so much fun to write in the sand one's feelings that may be washed away in seconds. Methinks your short contest entry does that.
Thanks for the artwork that reinforces that feeling.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as the line and syllable counts are correct throughout. The content is thought provoking as the reader ponders the deeper meaning of your well chosen words. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as the line and syllable counts are correct throughout. The content is thought provoking as the reader ponders the deeper meaning of your well chosen words. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you much of your kind words
Comment from Diana L Crawford
I like these short poems, but it is not as easy as it looks to come up with something that express a lot with so few words. You did awesome with this. I love you used the word mystery, it gives it just the right suspense! :) xoxo
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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I like these short poems, but it is not as easy as it looks to come up with something that express a lot with so few words. You did awesome with this. I love you used the word mystery, it gives it just the right suspense! :) xoxo
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from Susan X Smith
The picture is interesting and the poem meets the contest guidelines. I especially liked the last line. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing. Good luck in the contest voting.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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The picture is interesting and the poem meets the contest guidelines. I especially liked the last line. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing. Good luck in the contest voting.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your words
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You included so much in so few words here, and of course love and pain are closely linked as well as the magical feelings, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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You included so much in so few words here, and of course love and pain are closely linked as well as the magical feelings, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much, Ms. Dolly
Comment from Anntonette
Yes! When we love, we sometimes go through downs, but we have ups also to balance it. Short and sweet piece!
Love will never go away, it is eternal <3
- Anntonette J
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Yes! When we love, we sometimes go through downs, but we have ups also to balance it. Short and sweet piece!
Love will never go away, it is eternal <3
- Anntonette J
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind supports.
