Natural Harmony
Finding serenity at day's end...15 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
What a very peaceful read, a very clever short poem of the changing of days into the restful nights, very well written with great artwork to enhance, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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What a very peaceful read, a very clever short poem of the changing of days into the restful nights, very well written with great artwork to enhance, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Susan X Smith
I am no expert on Naani poetry - it is a new form to me so I can't speak as to whether you fulfill the technicalities, but it is a lovely poem. The words are well chosen and flow nicely. The scene you describe is serene and it is emphasized by the picture.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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I am no expert on Naani poetry - it is a new form to me so I can't speak as to whether you fulfill the technicalities, but it is a lovely poem. The words are well chosen and flow nicely. The scene you describe is serene and it is emphasized by the picture.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Susan!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a beautiful presentation, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Great job with the imagery your well-chosen words create. The image is perfect. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Admiration. Jan
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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This is a beautiful presentation, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Great job with the imagery your well-chosen words create. The image is perfect. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Admiration. Jan
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Jan.
Comment from Raul1
Well written. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Nice work! Well done.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Well written. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Nice work! Well done.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written naani vividly describes those moments when daylight is departing and nighttime is arriving. Your poem is very appealing, emphasizing the calmness and peace of night.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Your well-written naani vividly describes those moments when daylight is departing and nighttime is arriving. Your poem is very appealing, emphasizing the calmness and peace of night.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Janice.
