The Purr
3-5-3 Air Poem Contest Entry15 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and topic are good.
-I like your approach
to the topic with the
description of a cat
as it breathes, "in and out."
-The image in the second
like is very good, as well
as the conclusion.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and topic are good.
-I like your approach
to the topic with the
description of a cat
as it breathes, "in and out."
-The image in the second
like is very good, as well
as the conclusion.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Pam. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this. As the poem is only three lines long and you pointed out that you liked every line, well, I consider this a killer review! Thank you again.
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You are very welcome. I think you came to a good conclusion about your poem, too. I just realized we have a cat poem in common today:)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Air movement through breathing, pulsing, purring of the cat while it enjoys the touch of finger care and there is in and out of feline vibration; feeling in word visuals; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Air movement through breathing, pulsing, purring of the cat while it enjoys the touch of finger care and there is in and out of feline vibration; feeling in word visuals; well said, well done.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Love this review! I appreciate you reading and commenting on this contest entry. I think it's very cool that cats purr both inhaling and exhaling. Quite a feat, really. Thank you so much!
Comment from Mark D. R.
I do like how you purring cat breathes in and out. Your selected picture is a 'purr'fect match to your 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Good luck in the voting.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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I do like how you purring cat breathes in and out. Your selected picture is a 'purr'fect match to your 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Wow. Very cool review! I appreciate it. It's always amazed me how they purr both inhaling and exhaling. Loved your comments. Thank you, Mark!
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Humans do breathe in and out, but try saying anything on your inhalation - not so easy at best (-;
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LOL! Sometimes little kids get confused and do this when they're excited. Always cracks me up. Thanks again for the review.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a structurally sound 3-5-3 with correct line and syllable count on the topic of air. The approach is creative and quite clever. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a structurally sound 3-5-3 with correct line and syllable count on the topic of air. The approach is creative and quite clever. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Awesome review, Angel! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this entry. Lovely comments. Thank you!
Comment from LisaMay
Oh, so lovely... my heart lurched; that photo looks just like my cat looked when she was younger. I miss her - I had to get her put to sleep a few weeks ago.
You have captured a purr purr-fectly.
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Oh, so lovely... my heart lurched; that photo looks just like my cat looked when she was younger. I miss her - I had to get her put to sleep a few weeks ago.
You have captured a purr purr-fectly.
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thanks, JL. LOL! I was hoping you'd catch this. Couldn't resist it. She was in my thoughts while creating this. Glad you liked it!
