An Autumn Repose (tableau)
6 verses, 5 syllables each line15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An ambient write as autumn descends, the nights draw in and we cosy ourselves indoors with our cocoa, many more nights like this are to come, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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An ambient write as autumn descends, the nights draw in and we cosy ourselves indoors with our cocoa, many more nights like this are to come, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Dolly! You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned and structurally sound Tableau Poem. The line and syllable count are correct throughout You paint a clear and vivid picture of the cozy scene. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned and structurally sound Tableau Poem. The line and syllable count are correct throughout You paint a clear and vivid picture of the cozy scene. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi! Thank you :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tableau about the autumn repose when we watch the transition of the seasons with leaves swaying in the breezes until they cannot hold on any longer.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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A very well-written Tableau about the autumn repose when we watch the transition of the seasons with leaves swaying in the breezes until they cannot hold on any longer.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi! Thank you :)
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem is a lovely capture of autumn's appeal, however, you've broken 3 rules of the contest's instructions: no picture (the poem must speak for itself), no graphics, and only use basic editor. You've got time to amend it.
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Your poem is a lovely capture of autumn's appeal, however, you've broken 3 rules of the contest's instructions: no picture (the poem must speak for itself), no graphics, and only use basic editor. You've got time to amend it.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi! Yeah, okay. Thank you :)
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You're not the only one. At least 3 other entries have photos. I think the instructions should have been at the top rather than tucked away right at the end.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a well done tableau for the contest.
Your verse is colorful and paints a nice picture.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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I think this is a well done tableau for the contest.
Your verse is colorful and paints a nice picture.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hiyah! Thank you :)
