Comment from Therese Caron

Excellent

Aahhh! This is scary, but of course I love scary things. I love eerie things and this is definitely eerie. Great picture. The girl looks so peacefully asleep, and that horrible thing is waiting to get her. Well written horror poem.great 5-7-5 nightmare contest entry. Good luck!

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020

Thank you, Therese! This is my first venture into horror and I appreciate your positive comments. Very cool review. Yes, the artist on this picture is phenomenal. Exactly what I was looking for. Thank you again!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I miss Dean Kuch, he served as the go to writer on sight, something's missing without him. Well done with this, an excellent entry in this nightmare 5/7/5 poetry contest. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020

Yes, I miss Dean as well. I thank you for these lovely comments and appreciate your time to read and review this entry. Thank you, Roy!!

reply by royowen on 06-Jan-2020

Good job

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020

Wow! That means a lot. Thank you!

reply by royowen on 06-Jan-2020

Bless you