Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This is a chilling reminder of the darkness that descends upon the victims of sexual assault and domestic abuse - far worse than the deepest darkness of the forest.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Very well done. A complete story is just 59 words. Not easy. Drama and mystery is true here. Also truth as this kind of things is going on way too much. My state is tops for human trafficking. Sickening. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020

Thank you for your review. It is sad that this stuff still goes on.

Comment from Natalie Goodwin

Excellent

This is a great 60 word story. Your descriptions were vivid and you created a suspenseful mystery/crime story with very few words. Best of luck with your contest.

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020

Thank you.