Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

A lovely imagery of fairies, sprites, elves and pixies. Fireflies light their way in mid-summer here. I love to sit in the veranda and watch them light up the night. Especially later on in the evening.
Drew xx

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020

Oh, I do, too. Fireflies are so beautiful. Down here, we mostly call them lightning bugs. Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Diana L Crawford

Excellent

Lovely choice to offer for the author's choice club challenge. And your topic of fairies one of my favorite! Fantasy is such an incredible get-a-way, especially when done poetically!

Thank you for sharing! xoxo

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020

Thank you. I tend to think of fairies when I see fireflies, or as we call them down here, lightning bugs.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 01-Mar-2020

Ha! We call them lightning bugs too!! :)

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Great job with the mixed poem with an assortment of mystical creatures like elves and fairies. I'm glad they took the time to put on a special show for you. Thanks for sharing. Bill

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020

It was a feeble attempt for the challenge, but I haven't been feeling well. Fairies came to mind. I tend to think of fairies when I see fireflies, or as we call them down here, lightning bugs.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A lovely poem about this magical sight! I don't quite understand the Cascade poem but it does make the fairies and fireflies and elf appear surprisingly in different places!

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020

Look closely. Each line of the first stanza is repeated in the poem. I should have posted the instruction. The first line of the first stanza is the third line in the second stanza. And so on. Thanks for reviewing, and pardon me laziness in not providing notes.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

This is a lovely, fanciful, vividly descriptive poem. Word choices are effective, and the style is appealing. Very creative poem accompanied by charming artwork

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020

Thank you. I was watching the fireflies, and I tend to think of fairies when I see fireflies, or as we call them down here, lightning bugs.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A modified cascade after my own heart -- love all the little fae folk in you fantasy offering, Yvonne!! ;) Thanx so much for that little ray of sunshine! ;) Yvette

An pixie joined --> A pixie joined

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020

Thank you so much. I will get right to that error.

Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
What a wonder story of joy happiness with, music .
Be it a dream or real.
I wish I was there.
Cookie

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020

Next time I see them, I'll call you. 8-)

reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 02-Mar-2020

okay, until next time.
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