Reborn
A freestyle poem of my faith.41 total reviews
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
A very moving and inspiring poem showing the greatest love that ever lived! Your words "hit the nail on the cross!" I am glad I decided to "get back" on to FanStory and read your very humbling poem. Love the cross over the butterfly too.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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A very moving and inspiring poem showing the greatest love that ever lived! Your words "hit the nail on the cross!" I am glad I decided to "get back" on to FanStory and read your very humbling poem. Love the cross over the butterfly too.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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I could just cry!!!!!!! Tears of joy!!!!! At the feet of Jesus we have shared so much, my dear young friend. I am so glad we have this kinship and bond. It is a delight to see you over this poem or anywhere. Please send me your mailing address by private fan mail so that I may send you a signed copy of "What The Blind Girl Saw." I just published two weeks ago with Kindle Books on Amazon.com. I finished with the Finale and Epilogue this year on FanStory and went straight to publishing. My family helped me do this, and my husband and I designed the bookcover. :)
I can't wait to catch up. In the meantime, welcome back, and thank you so much for the awesome review and stars!!
Love, Sally xoxoxo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your "eye witness" account of the Crucifixion of Jesus and the resulting salvation of the soul is dramatically moving and deeply effective. I love the way it flows.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Your "eye witness" account of the Crucifixion of Jesus and the resulting salvation of the soul is dramatically moving and deeply effective. I love the way it flows.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, Janice dear. I'm so glad this poem spoke to you. Sending you my best today as always, and blessings in Christ,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written faith poem about the journey of Jesus Christ from his birth to the cross where He died to give us the chance to be reborn and live with His spirit within us.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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A very well-written faith poem about the journey of Jesus Christ from his birth to the cross where He died to give us the chance to be reborn and live with His spirit within us.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and insightful comments, dear Sandra. I'm glad you saw the big picture within.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a beautifully written faith poem. It really does allow the reader to feel as though they too were present at the feet of Jesus. The understanding from his crucifixion - a gift of clarity and rebirth.
I have faith this poem will do well in the contest. ~DD
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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This is a beautifully written faith poem. It really does allow the reader to feel as though they too were present at the feet of Jesus. The understanding from his crucifixion - a gift of clarity and rebirth.
I have faith this poem will do well in the contest. ~DD
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, dear DD. I really appreciate the excellent review of my faith poem. I've had the vision of this so many times, Id thought I'd write about it. My salvation is very real to me, as if I was there that day.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from MamaBebop
Sally,
I am very emotional after reading your poem. What I liked the most about it was you put us there at the foot of the cross, we watched the sufferings of Jesus, and you told the story in a very personal way-like it was me saying it too.
I always have a great sense of the guilt when I think about or see scenes of the cruxifixction, but also relief in being freed from sin by it.
Thank you for letting me be reborn with you this morning!
I feel wonderful!!
Much love and prayers,
Beth
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Sally,
I am very emotional after reading your poem. What I liked the most about it was you put us there at the foot of the cross, we watched the sufferings of Jesus, and you told the story in a very personal way-like it was me saying it too.
I always have a great sense of the guilt when I think about or see scenes of the cruxifixction, but also relief in being freed from sin by it.
Thank you for letting me be reborn with you this morning!
I feel wonderful!!
Much love and prayers,
Beth
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you, dear Beth. I am deeply honored but even more than this review, just knowing we share this amazing Savior and faith. My salvation experience was dramatic and I saw myself many times at the foot of the cross. I decided to write about that day. His love and sacrifice was and still is, the greatest act of love.
Sending you my best today as always on this wonderful day,
Sal xoxoxo
Comment from Patty Palmer
What a wonderful poem! A tribute to our Lord and Savior! How much He loved us that He was willing to give His own life so that we could have ours. And not even one of us worthy of His love. What a beautiful name it is JESUS! Thank you for sharing!
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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What a wonderful poem! A tribute to our Lord and Savior! How much He loved us that He was willing to give His own life so that we could have ours. And not even one of us worthy of His love. What a beautiful name it is JESUS! Thank you for sharing!
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, dear Patty. We can never praise Him enough and this one had been building for a while. I had to submit it earlier than planned. I'm glad I did. It was needed and I needed it more than anyone. I am blessed by your kind review, star blast, and affirming words of our mutual faith. It means so much to me.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sally xoxo
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You're welcome~
patty
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Reborn", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but sadly I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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"Reborn", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but sadly I've run out of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you, my sweet Aussie. I appreciate your wonderful review and kind encouragement. It is always so appreciated and seems to come attached with your name. :) ;)
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxoxo
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Thank you Sal,my possum.
You deserved the wonderful review.
Your best always cheer me up.
God bless and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from Susan Larson
This was beautifully written, Sally, and so full of emotion. That book, A Doctor at Calvary, sounds like a really good read. I love your final words, "The end of your life was the beginning of mine. My sins were forgiven,
and I left them there... at your feet. I had been reborn.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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This was beautifully written, Sally, and so full of emotion. That book, A Doctor at Calvary, sounds like a really good read. I love your final words, "The end of your life was the beginning of mine. My sins were forgiven,
and I left them there... at your feet. I had been reborn.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, dear Susan. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem and were touched by the words within. It was my heart of gratitude, I think. I love Him so.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Beautifully written, Sally. Your lines read well, there is good flow, the image is a great pairing, but it is your message that stands above all. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Beautifully written, Sally. Your lines read well, there is good flow, the image is a great pairing, but it is your message that stands above all. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you, dear Jan. I'm a new poetress and I always appreciate what the seasoned poets have to say. It means so much when you and so many others liked this. It was from my heart.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Drew Delaney
A beautiful and well-written piece on the suffering Christ went through for our sins. God, the Father gave His Son so that we might live. There is no greater love than this.
Well done!
Drew
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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A beautiful and well-written piece on the suffering Christ went through for our sins. God, the Father gave His Son so that we might live. There is no greater love than this.
Well done!
Drew
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review of my faith poem. I always love to hear what my brothers and sisters in Christ have to say. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
