A Window On My World
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "By The Duck Pond"Daily 5-7-5 simplicities for April Na-Po-Wri-Mo
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Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, Lisa!
Your well-crafted poem echoes the feelings that I also possess: I would love to "fly away" as well! We also enjoy the presence of ducks that live by our bay - East Grand Traverse Bay - just down from our home. Delightful to observe - and a wonderful diversion at this time...
Thank you for sharing!
Take Care!
diane
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Good Morning, Lisa!
Your well-crafted poem echoes the feelings that I also possess: I would love to "fly away" as well! We also enjoy the presence of ducks that live by our bay - East Grand Traverse Bay - just down from our home. Delightful to observe - and a wonderful diversion at this time...
Thank you for sharing!
Take Care!
diane
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
Comment from patcelaw
We are in a lock down for 30 days, I have now survived the first 24 hours, now only 696 hours to go but if I sleep 7 hours a night then I will only have to be aware that I am in lock down for fewer hours. So sleeping would consider as my duck fly away time.
Patricia
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We are in a lock down for 30 days, I have now survived the first 24 hours, now only 696 hours to go but if I sleep 7 hours a night then I will only have to be aware that I am in lock down for fewer hours. So sleeping would consider as my duck fly away time.
Patricia
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
Yes, they have the freedom denied to us at the moment. I like the way the two are connected by the repetition of ducks in their first lines and the end rhyme in their last lines.
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Yes, they have the freedom denied to us at the moment. I like the way the two are connected by the repetition of ducks in their first lines and the end rhyme in their last lines.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
Comment from Ogden
Be carful what you wish for. There are disadvantages, of being a duck, not the least of them being eating worms and insects.
I imagine that might make you reconsider, and leave well enough alone.
(Keep safe!)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Be carful what you wish for. There are disadvantages, of being a duck, not the least of them being eating worms and insects.
I imagine that might make you reconsider, and leave well enough alone.
(Keep safe!)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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I might get made into an eider down also, with winter coming along here.
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Why not just stay as sweet as you are?
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Hahaha--- how obvious that you have never met me hahahaha.
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Ha ha ha, indeed. I gave you the benefit of my having no doubt. As I saw no advantage in eider option, I let you virtue stand.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
A beautiful picture with poignant words to accompany it, LisaMay. You did a great job with the syllable count per line. I don't see this as envy--more of a sadness on your part that you feeling the stress of the unknown with the virus. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe. Respectfully, Jan
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A beautiful picture with poignant words to accompany it, LisaMay. You did a great job with the syllable count per line. I don't see this as envy--more of a sadness on your part that you feeling the stress of the unknown with the virus. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
Comment from Jen Vasquez
This is a very cute simple poem obviously espressive so what is being jealous the docks cuz they can just fly away from coronavirus lockdowns and we cannot I am here on lockdown in New Jersey you don't have many ducks or ponds for that matter but I guess I feel the same way for pigeons. Keep up the good writing send some more
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This is a very cute simple poem obviously espressive so what is being jealous the docks cuz they can just fly away from coronavirus lockdowns and we cannot I am here on lockdown in New Jersey you don't have many ducks or ponds for that matter but I guess I feel the same way for pigeons. Keep up the good writing send some more
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes Lisa, these ducks have freedom when we do not and we have seen turtles on the beaches here because they have been deserted and they have had the confidence to explore. I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Yes Lisa, these ducks have freedom when we do not and we have seen turtles on the beaches here because they have been deserted and they have had the confidence to explore. I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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I love hearing that the turtles can explore their own beaches again. We humans are having to take a back seat for a while.
