A Window On My World
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Easter Bubble"Daily 5-7-5 simplicities for April Na-Po-Wri-Mo
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Comment from Drew Delaney
Loved this positive view on being self-isolated. Reach out and touch someone. Your presentation is fun. I like the bubble particularly and the colour! Such an inspiring piece and very sweet! Stay well!
Drew xx
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Loved this positive view on being self-isolated. Reach out and touch someone. Your presentation is fun. I like the bubble particularly and the colour! Such an inspiring piece and very sweet! Stay well!
Drew xx
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
Comment from Sugarray77
Well said Lisa. I like your verse and its gentle nudge to think of others and bring a helpful dose of inspiration to others. I like how your final stanza used end rhymes. It added a lilt. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Well said Lisa. I like your verse and its gentle nudge to think of others and bring a helpful dose of inspiration to others. I like how your final stanza used end rhymes. It added a lilt. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your review, Melissa. (I've been slow in responding because I am writing so much - this lockdown has triggered so many emotions and observations.)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 suite, Easter Bubble, has the correct framing and looks within to find actionable and doable items to extend the limits of ability to the outer world.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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This 5-7-5 suite, Easter Bubble, has the correct framing and looks within to find actionable and doable items to extend the limits of ability to the outer world.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your review, Bill. (I've been slow in responding because I am writing so much - this lockdown has triggered so many emotions and observations.)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Yes, you are right. Don't close down, reach out. Emails and telephones are tools. I too have that feeling of helplessness and wanting to do something for someone else. Then I think "Staying here is saving lives."
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Yes, you are right. Don't close down, reach out. Emails and telephones are tools. I too have that feeling of helplessness and wanting to do something for someone else. Then I think "Staying here is saving lives."
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
Comment from Puzzle
Yes. A great idea is to run errands for elderly in your area. Especially if you are a healthy middle aged adult! This is a topic I don't think anyone has touched yet! Great job!!!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Yes. A great idea is to run errands for elderly in your area. Especially if you are a healthy middle aged adult! This is a topic I don't think anyone has touched yet! Great job!!!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your review. (I've been slow in responding because I am writing so much - this lockdown has triggered so many emotions and observations.)
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Yesssss me too.
Comment from Cindy Decker
Lisa, your poem mirrors my sentiments. I stay at home a lot; home it is my fortress. It's a safe place, but I know I should reach out more to people. About your notes, you do so much in life and that's wonderful--diversions that inspire you. This poem's brevity is its charm. Excellent work. Good luck. Happy Easter.
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Lisa, your poem mirrors my sentiments. I stay at home a lot; home it is my fortress. It's a safe place, but I know I should reach out more to people. About your notes, you do so much in life and that's wonderful--diversions that inspire you. This poem's brevity is its charm. Excellent work. Good luck. Happy Easter.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Well, the current situation throws up all kinds of challenges and possibilities and it is up to the individual how these things play out. Of course, there are those who have no choice.
As many are having to stay in, there are countless others who do not have that opportunity and have to put themselves at risk. It's truly mindboggling.
A lot of folk are reaching out electronically which has proven to be both a blessing and a curse! lol
Nice little piece.
GMG
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Hi there,
Well, the current situation throws up all kinds of challenges and possibilities and it is up to the individual how these things play out. Of course, there are those who have no choice.
As many are having to stay in, there are countless others who do not have that opportunity and have to put themselves at risk. It's truly mindboggling.
A lot of folk are reaching out electronically which has proven to be both a blessing and a curse! lol
Nice little piece.
GMG
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. We owe a lot to frontline staff in this battle.
I have a 'digital holiday' from time to time, I hate getting avalanched with emails and i refuse to engage via Facebook.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love your inventive word: 'staycation' so apt for todays situation and your presentation made me smile and I dare say there will be lots of internet activity over this weekend, happy Easter Lisa, this poem is much fun, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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I love your inventive word: 'staycation' so apt for todays situation and your presentation made me smile and I dare say there will be lots of internet activity over this weekend, happy Easter Lisa, this poem is much fun, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reviewing, Dolly. I am getting sick of being avalanched with emails and I don't do facebook stuff.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is an excellent comment on current problems without ever mentioning the hated V word or should that be C word? Well who cares.
The poem uses coining with a splendid creation -- 'staycation'. I've been having those for years.
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This is an excellent comment on current problems without ever mentioning the hated V word or should that be C word? Well who cares.
The poem uses coining with a splendid creation -- 'staycation'. I've been having those for years.
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
