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Comment from Drew Delaney
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Ha, ha! So fun to allow ourselves some letting go of trapped air! Sometimes I think if a camera was hidden, what a laugh someone would have. LOL
Just do what you are doing and have fun!
Drew xx

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    "You're on candid camera" could provide footage for many TV shows in my house. What a terrible thought!
Comment from Puzzle
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Hahahahaha. This is awesome. Yes we are becoming cave woman as time progresses. Lol. It stinks. Pun intended! Haha. I loved this funny poem. I need some laughter in my life these days!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Thanks for the high rating. I'm so please you appreciate my stinky fun.
Comment from Louise Michelle
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LOL - this is hysterical. Under normal circumstances, I would say you need to get out more. But that's the point! Thank you for this fun-to-read offering. Perhaps you could burp to music - just another thought to keep you sane. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Burping to music is another indulgence of mine. I had a boss years and years ago who could burp the first part of the Australian national anthem. We youngsters were in awe.
Comment from Pantygynt
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Life in an apartment must be hell under the lockdown regulations. I am so lucky, like you, to be able to yodel my heart out and still not have anyone respond. Mind you the lack of response probably has as much to with my inability to yodel as it does with social distancing. In fact it used to be called antisocial distancing, now it's all the rage.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    We are suddenly 'trendy' - not a territory i am familiar with.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fun post and we often make fun of our bodily functions and here you wrote a lighthearted fun rhyme to be enjoyed by both adults and children Lisa, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    I have exaggerated of course, tee hee.
Comment from Cindy Decker
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Lisa May, a very fun poem to enjoy during this world wide "incarceration." Light and enjoyable. Enjoy your day today and always. Good work. Good luck.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    I have exaggerated of course, tee hee.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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The wind with its flatulent fanfare earns your stars in itself. I am amused to learn how you keep amused in lockdown. I have faith that when (if?) this ends you'll have gotten this out of your system and will be relieved to behave like an adult. Well, to whatever extent you did pre-lockdown. Meantime, enjoy making crude noise. Cheers. LIZ

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    I have exaggerated of course, tee hee.
Comment from humpwhistle
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Ah, farting for fun and frolic. Seems Netflix has met its match.
Frankly, I'm surprised at how difficult it is for some folks to cope with required downtime. Economic concerns aside, I'd think people would welcome some forced relaxation. Harder for some than others, obviously.

Perhaps we can learn from your childish indiscretions and rediscover some simple pleasures.

Peace, Lee

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    I don't have Netflix, and have no desire to engage with Facebook. I don't do Skype or Zoom either. I live alone (happily enough) and have had no issues with entertaining myself. My only admissions of being bored are that some chores bore me, because i would rather be doing something else. I can always entertain myself with simple, free pleasures... writing being one of them (apart from Fanstory costs).
reply by humpwhistle on 13-Apr-2020
    I hope I didn't imply you were one who couldn't entertain herself. That is not belief, nor was it my intention.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Oh no, I didn't jump to that conclusion with what you said, i was just filling up time with saying how i don't seem to need what most everyone else does. Most people seem to spend their days on ghastly Facebook.