A Window On My World
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Comment from Rmocruz
Oh my! You have a worm farm. Do you enjoy fishing?
I hate when they squeeze too hard.
Seriously this is very well written and makes an excellent addition to your chapter.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Oh my! You have a worm farm. Do you enjoy fishing?
I hate when they squeeze too hard.
Seriously this is very well written and makes an excellent addition to your chapter.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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The worms aren't for fishing, they eat food scraps - even tea bags and egg shells - and make 'castings' which are wonderful compost for the garden.
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I was just being facetious.
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haha... so I gave you an unnecessary lecture about worm farms. (A lot of people don't know about them.)
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I had a compost pile for my garden,
I put the worms in the garden to loosen the soil.
Ever see the horror movie"Squirm?"
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No i haven't. Death by worms?
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Yes, you guessed it, a sick flick indeed!
Comment from Cindy Decker
Lisa, this is a very good poem that should be read by everyone around they world, because we are all affected by corona. I like the way you humble people at your worm comparison. Man is constantly destroying God's beautiful Earth. I pray for the victims of this devastating illness. You say many things in your brief poem. Excellent work. Stay healthy, Lisa and have a wonderful weekend. Blessings,
Cindy
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Lisa, this is a very good poem that should be read by everyone around they world, because we are all affected by corona. I like the way you humble people at your worm comparison. Man is constantly destroying God's beautiful Earth. I pray for the victims of this devastating illness. You say many things in your brief poem. Excellent work. Stay healthy, Lisa and have a wonderful weekend. Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are certainly being put to the test right now Lisa, have we learned any lessons? I think we may have learned a few, but I think we will lapse back into our old ways once all this dies down. We are the kings of this plant, but we are not Gods and we should remember to behave with some humanity, wise words here about the meal inheriting the earth, love Dolly x
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We are certainly being put to the test right now Lisa, have we learned any lessons? I think we may have learned a few, but I think we will lapse back into our old ways once all this dies down. We are the kings of this plant, but we are not Gods and we should remember to behave with some humanity, wise words here about the meal inheriting the earth, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a humorous poem with a nice rhythm and rhyme. I enjoyed reading it It relates well to the current condition in our society. Thanks for sharing.
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This is a humorous poem with a nice rhythm and rhyme. I enjoyed reading it It relates well to the current condition in our society. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Happy to learn that you can be inspired to write a spiritual poem from an extra hard squeeze of toothpaste! Yes, the meek shall inherit the earth and God is giving His creation a sabbath during our self-isolation.
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Happy to learn that you can be inspired to write a spiritual poem from an extra hard squeeze of toothpaste! Yes, the meek shall inherit the earth and God is giving His creation a sabbath during our self-isolation.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
