Never Give In
Stand against the darkness... someone will eventually see17 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the stars that we can only see when it is dark but they are always there even when the sun shines, we can not see them in the lightened sky.
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the stars that we can only see when it is dark but they are always there even when the sun shines, we can not see them in the lightened sky.
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Ogden
That is an excellent observation! Also true is that the brightest stars in the night are the most likely to be seen.
Good luck in the 5-7-5 poetry contest!
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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That is an excellent observation! Also true is that the brightest stars in the night are the most likely to be seen.
Good luck in the 5-7-5 poetry contest!
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Lol! Can't argue with you there... (wink,wink) Thanks for the review, Don!
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You're very welcome, although I disapprove of this wanton flirting!
:O(
Don
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this lovely piece. This concept had never really occurred to me before. Good luck with the competition! Stay safe and healthy during these difficult times!
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Congratulations on this lovely piece. This concept had never really occurred to me before. Good luck with the competition! Stay safe and healthy during these difficult times!
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Little Bird, for this awesome review and for those shining stars - they make the rain outside just that much more 'ignorable' (wink, wink!). May you have a wonderful remainder of the week with sunshine in your days and starshine in your nights!
Comment from tfawcus
This is a particularly powerful metaphor because of the truth in it. Indeed, the darker the skies, the more small stars reveal themselves, equally true in the night sky and the human condition, as the response to the current pandemic testifies.
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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This is a particularly powerful metaphor because of the truth in it. Indeed, the darker the skies, the more small stars reveal themselves, equally true in the night sky and the human condition, as the response to the current pandemic testifies.
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Minglement
This is a poignant entry for the 5-7-5 contest. You've presented it beautifully with your artwork and color scheme e hancing your touching lines. Loved your notes as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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This is a poignant entry for the 5-7-5 contest. You've presented it beautifully with your artwork and color scheme e hancing your touching lines. Loved your notes as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you!
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My pleasure.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have used your seventeen sylables effectively to convey a powerful message about hope, a glimpse of light in the darkness. Good use of stars as a symbol.
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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You have used your seventeen sylables effectively to convey a powerful message about hope, a glimpse of light in the darkness. Good use of stars as a symbol.
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
In the darkest night,
even the tiniest stars
are easily seen. Nice lesson of astrology, quickly make a wish and win the contest. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next literary adventure.
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reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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In the darkest night,
even the tiniest stars
are easily seen. Nice lesson of astrology, quickly make a wish and win the contest. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next literary adventure.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you!