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What Will We Leave Them ?

A 5-7-5 Poem

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Our children will learn from past of the future, the legacy of mankind, so what will we leave for them? well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 19-May-2020


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    Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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An ironic poem as we never seem to learn from our past, and it is often repeated and yet another virus has thwarted us here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 19-May-2020


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    Thank you very much
Comment from humpwhistle
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That's a very fine sentiment, but, sadly, mankind has a strong tendency to ignore past mistakes. Learning from our past is not enough. We have to act upon it--even when our duty is inconvenient. We know about the plight of the environment, but we do precisous little to remedy the situation. At this rate, mankind will destroy it's own legacy in a matter of generations.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

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 Comment Written 19-May-2020


reply by the author on 19-May-2020
    Thank you for your wonderful comments