Justified By Faith
a contest entry28 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation, Mystery Author, is beautiful. Good job with the syllable count per line. I like the color scheme, the image, and your formatting of lines. But, it is your message that makes this poem. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Your presentation, Mystery Author, is beautiful. Good job with the syllable count per line. I like the color scheme, the image, and your formatting of lines. But, it is your message that makes this poem. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A nicely crafted 5-7-5 syllables for the contest. A Christian message of faith. It was enjoyable and moving as the faith in His word is realized. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments are necessary.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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A nicely crafted 5-7-5 syllables for the contest. A Christian message of faith. It was enjoyable and moving as the faith in His word is realized. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments are necessary.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and best wishes...
Blessings
Comment from suep
This is a well-written 5-7-5 that speaks a wonderful truth, and I love that you put the supporting scriptures in your notes. This is so beautifully presented as well. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Sue P.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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This is a well-written 5-7-5 that speaks a wonderful truth, and I love that you put the supporting scriptures in your notes. This is so beautifully presented as well. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Sue P.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings...
Comment from Raul1
I feel that this poem is very inspirational. It feels comforting and very good. It has a chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I feel that this poem is very inspirational. It feels comforting and very good. It has a chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings...
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The sounds from pronouncing the hard sounds, j, th, d, b, m, p, f effect the sense of determination and solvency. There is no hint of hesitation in these sounds. I love reading poetry aloud. This was fun to read dramatically. Well thought out.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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The sounds from pronouncing the hard sounds, j, th, d, b, m, p, f effect the sense of determination and solvency. There is no hint of hesitation in these sounds. I love reading poetry aloud. This was fun to read dramatically. Well thought out.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.
Blessings...
Comment from zanya
It's such a consolation to read some spiritual poetry on this writing site and here is one to ponder on matters beyond our daily toils and cares -thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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It's such a consolation to read some spiritual poetry on this writing site and here is one to ponder on matters beyond our daily toils and cares -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.
Blessings
Comment from Boogienights
I like this short poem, with it's positive message. It's great to know that faith will see us through as is explained in your notes. I appreciate those especially, not being a student of the bible because it helps put everything in perspective. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I like this short poem, with it's positive message. It's great to know that faith will see us through as is explained in your notes. I appreciate those especially, not being a student of the bible because it helps put everything in perspective. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and comments...
Blessings
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. The picture caught my attention right away and goes well with your poem. I love all of the biblical references in the author note section. Jesus was the promise fulfiled, the world had waited long enough.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. The picture caught my attention right away and goes well with your poem. I love all of the biblical references in the author note section. Jesus was the promise fulfiled, the world had waited long enough.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments.
Blessings
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Justified By Faith
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. Good connection between lines. The poem flows well. Pretty presentation.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Justified By Faith
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. Good connection between lines. The poem flows well. Pretty presentation.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments.
God Bless
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, engaging, and creative. The words of
this poem flow and connect well. Thank you for the author's notes
they supported the poem well. The artwork is perfect and compliment
this poem. Sorry I must have hit the wrong key! Thank you for letting me
know....
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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The author's words are clear, engaging, and creative. The words of
this poem flow and connect well. Thank you for the author's notes
they supported the poem well. The artwork is perfect and compliment
this poem. Sorry I must have hit the wrong key! Thank you for letting me
know....
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Harmony,
Did you mean to give this a two star rating? If so what do I need to do to improve? Thanks so much for your review.
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Hi! So sorry! I must have hit
the wrong key. I just updated
the rating. Thanks, Maria
