Comment from roof35

Excellent

Nice imagination here. The dialog was believable. It took me a minute to understand where the character actually was, but you brought me along soon. Good work.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020

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reply by the author on 21-May-2020

Thank you! I had to edit out the explanation, so few words to work with! lol. But I'm glad it was clear after a second. :)
Thank you for reading!

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Wow, nice jump in time, there is life after Covix, good news, but you can still day because people forgot about you in the aclimatization section. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 21-May-2020

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reply by the author on 21-May-2020

Thank you! I appreciate your review and kind words. :)

Comment from January L'Angelle

Excellent

I like this story. I like that it's a monologue and that you managed to tell a really comprehensive story in it. I love that it's futuristic and that you took it all the way to the end. That was very cool. Great job. -January L.

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 Comment Written 21-May-2020

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reply by the author on 21-May-2020

Thank you, January. I appreciate you reading and reviewing and your kind words. :)