Comment from roof35

Excellent

I decided to give you five stars as I think you made the last line "not perfect" on purpose. If I am wrong, it was still quite nicely done. I enjoyed reading it. Of course, your illustration paired perfectly.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020

Thank you so much for your beautiful review.

Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova

Excellent

I see no losers here.
This is a great little poem. To celebrate one's imperfections is to free oneself from the need to fit into the prim little mold that the need for such creates. You know the mold I speak of: "I want people to think I'm important so I wear expensive jewelry or a neatly pressed tie." or something along those lines.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020

Thank you so much for your beautiful review.

Comment from CHANYA MASHENGU

Excellent

Finding peace in perfection. True when we realize its purely the work of the creator.

Forgiveness is paramount. I couldn't agree more.

The work was crafted in simple and clear English to the delight of readers

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 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020

Thank you so much for your beautiful review.

Comment from Amanda Louise Davis

Good

I like this poem. It's positive and very upeat. I would remove the language warning. There is no bad language in this. It might warn certain people away from reading this. I also think the words 'cruise my fantasy' don't fit. Maybe 'live my fantasy.' Not sure.

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 Comment Written 05-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020

Thank you so much for your wonderful review.