Winners and Losers
Do you have the courage?14 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Great job with the prompt--I like the image, the formatting of lines, and the end rhymes. Your poem makes a strong, and true, statement about winners and losers. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
regreting-->regretting
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Great job with the prompt--I like the image, the formatting of lines, and the end rhymes. Your poem makes a strong, and true, statement about winners and losers. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
regreting-->regretting
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
Comment from roof35
You followed the rules and rhymed it beautifully, too. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words as they are obviously winners thriving in ecstasy.
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You followed the rules and rhymed it beautifully, too. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly with your words as they are obviously winners thriving in ecstasy.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Nice job. Good luck on the contest!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Nice job. Good luck on the contest!
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice play between the two concepts that are playing constant roles into our lives and help us move on. Sometimes we choose the loser side and sometimes the winners side. I like this stanza:"Winners dare to dive in head first
Living passionately quenching their thirst
Thriving in ecstasy until they burst" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Nice play between the two concepts that are playing constant roles into our lives and help us move on. Sometimes we choose the loser side and sometimes the winners side. I like this stanza:"Winners dare to dive in head first
Living passionately quenching their thirst
Thriving in ecstasy until they burst" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
