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to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Earl Corp
Nothing like getting the runaround when you're sick is there? I found a couple of things that need tweaking: Shouldn't it be worn instead of wear? Shouldn't it be deaths. Shouldn't it due to? Why are you capitalizing lab? Should send be sent? Call or called?
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
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