He Hogs The Blankets
Witty animal 5-7-513 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this witty animal poem. I like your play on words And rhyme. Good luck in the contest. You definitely found the right picture to match your writing. Bill
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
Great job with this witty animal poem. I like your play on words And rhyme. Good luck in the contest. You definitely found the right picture to match your writing. Bill
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a cute entry for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 contest.
The picture is a great match as well.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a cute entry for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 contest.
The picture is a great match as well.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A wonderful entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.
The boarpig is a good topic. I like the humor and clever double meaning.
Good luck!
Gypsy
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
Hello, anonymous,
A wonderful entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.
The boarpig is a good topic. I like the humor and clever double meaning.
Good luck!
Gypsy
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!