Peace
At the end of the day.38 total reviews
Comment from Laurie Holding
This is beautiful and inspiring! It's difficult to capture any solid message in this few words, but you've found a way. Well done, and I love the accompanying artwork, as well!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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This is beautiful and inspiring! It's difficult to capture any solid message in this few words, but you've found a way. Well done, and I love the accompanying artwork, as well!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the kind review. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from January L'Angelle
Dearest Sally, This should be true of most people. I feel sorry for people that hang on to troubles or their anger at the end of their day and find it hard to go to sleep at night. I live by your poem... I sleep like a baby! God bless you. Hugs! -January L. :)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Dearest Sally, This should be true of most people. I feel sorry for people that hang on to troubles or their anger at the end of their day and find it hard to go to sleep at night. I live by your poem... I sleep like a baby! God bless you. Hugs! -January L. :)
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs......
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, Sally.
-You have written a good
poem for the contest.
-A good topic and
effective use of one
continuous thought.
-A very good message
about clearing the mind
at the end of the day for
"a peaceful sleep."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation, Sally.
-You have written a good
poem for the contest.
-A good topic and
effective use of one
continuous thought.
-A very good message
about clearing the mind
at the end of the day for
"a peaceful sleep."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments, dear Pam. Much appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs......
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You are very welcome, Sally. Hope you are doing well.
Comment from Gloria ....
Very sound advice and written poetically too. When it is time to sleep, that is when the mind is emptied of all the thoughts that disturb sleep.
Great job with this fifteen syllable poem and best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Very sound advice and written poetically too. When it is time to sleep, that is when the mind is emptied of all the thoughts that disturb sleep.
Great job with this fifteen syllable poem and best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank our, dear Gloria. I'm glad you enjoyed my peaceful remedy for sleep. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs......
Comment from June Sargent
Amen to that! We need to jet it all go at the end of the day. Tomorrow will arrive with its own baggage. Let's get some well deserved rest...with some relaxing music.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Amen to that! We need to jet it all go at the end of the day. Tomorrow will arrive with its own baggage. Let's get some well deserved rest...with some relaxing music.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Amenx2! I'm glad you agree and I thank you for the lovely review, dear June. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.....
Comment from Cindy Decker
Sally, exceptional 15 syllable poem. The sky is beautiful in the photo you provided, reflected in a crystal blue lake. I should take heed of your words. My dog and I need nighttime sleep. Lol. Have a wonderful week, Sal.
Good luck in your contests.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Sally, exceptional 15 syllable poem. The sky is beautiful in the photo you provided, reflected in a crystal blue lake. I should take heed of your words. My dog and I need nighttime sleep. Lol. Have a wonderful week, Sal.
Good luck in your contests.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Ah, Cindy, thank you so much! How kind you are. I am deeply honored. I really appreciate the stars and kind compliments. Hopefully, the committee likes it. ;)
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.......
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Eckhart Tolle would love this poem. He, for me, specializes on helping the mind to stop chattering so we can sleep. What a give to live this poem. If we could look at ittheway you describe it. If we could resolve that we will not let anything disturb us. It reminds me of the Prayer of St. Teresa of Avila
Let nothing disturb you,
Let nothing frighten you,
All things are passing away:
God never changes.
Patience obtains all things
Whoever has God lacks nothing;
God alone suffices.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Eckhart Tolle would love this poem. He, for me, specializes on helping the mind to stop chattering so we can sleep. What a give to live this poem. If we could look at ittheway you describe it. If we could resolve that we will not let anything disturb us. It reminds me of the Prayer of St. Teresa of Avila
Let nothing disturb you,
Let nothing frighten you,
All things are passing away:
God never changes.
Patience obtains all things
Whoever has God lacks nothing;
God alone suffices.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Love that poem! Especially the line, whoever has God lacks nothing. A wonderful reminder in these days and times.
Oops... Thanks for the lovely review, too. Sal XOs......
Comment from fm wright
It flows very well and each line compliments the one before it. It also says a great deal with just a few words. Love the artwork and the video. All three combine to give a great message.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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It flows very well and each line compliments the one before it. It also says a great deal with just a few words. Love the artwork and the video. All three combine to give a great message.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thank you, dear Faye. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. I am deeply honored once again and blessed by this. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo's........
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Truly thought it a wonderful piece. My best back to you.
X's and o's,
Faye
Comment from mermaids
Your words have meaning and give good advice about letting go of everything and then sleep will be peaceful. You say much in three lines and did well with fifteen syllables.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Your words have meaning and give good advice about letting go of everything and then sleep will be peaceful. You say much in three lines and did well with fifteen syllables.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thank you, dear Mermaid. I'm glad you enjoyed my advice in poetry form.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very beautiful presentation Sally. The picture is so beautiful and the words fit so well. Thank you for the link to the Photos of Clouds and the very peaceful music in this video, that personifies your message.
Here's a hug...Ralf
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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A very beautiful presentation Sally. The picture is so beautiful and the words fit so well. Thank you for the link to the Photos of Clouds and the very peaceful music in this video, that personifies your message.
Here's a hug...Ralf
Comment Written 02-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Thanks for the hug and lovely review. I needed them both! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs......
