What if,
wondering about a different result.51 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
Yes. Out there are a whole lot us who harbour in the deep recesses of our minds similar thoughts.What if he/she had not left us so early ? Often we sigh thinking about this..well done .The refrain add to the haunting nature of the poem.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Yes. Out there are a whole lot us who harbour in the deep recesses of our minds similar thoughts.What if he/she had not left us so early ? Often we sigh thinking about this..well done .The refrain add to the haunting nature of the poem.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review and thoughts
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a great poem. It was hard for me to read because I lost my mother 13 years ago, and mourn her every day.
These are such heartwarming, adorable words you found to describe your mother. But you were fortunate to have these precious seven years with your mother and they will stay with you forever.
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, this brought myriads of memories, thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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This is a great poem. It was hard for me to read because I lost my mother 13 years ago, and mourn her every day.
These are such heartwarming, adorable words you found to describe your mother. But you were fortunate to have these precious seven years with your mother and they will stay with you forever.
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, this brought myriads of memories, thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your kind words and review. I do not think no matter what your age, the wound of losing a mother never heals.
Comment from ameen786
Hello Mary, my friend you penned a beautiful and touching poem, simple down to earth vocabulary, phrased into meaningful, poignant verses; please keep writing and share, thank you.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Hello Mary, my friend you penned a beautiful and touching poem, simple down to earth vocabulary, phrased into meaningful, poignant verses; please keep writing and share, thank you.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review and kind comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
What if,
by Mary Vigasin
Hello, Mary,
I'm sorry for your loss. I was ten when my mother died and it changed the course of my life. Sometimes I miss having a mom. You did a good job with your heartfelt poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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What if,
by Mary Vigasin
Hello, Mary,
I'm sorry for your loss. I was ten when my mother died and it changed the course of my life. Sometimes I miss having a mom. You did a good job with your heartfelt poem. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Thank you. Your losing at 10 so sorry. It does change the course of the family drastically and then it never adjust to be on course.
Thank you for the kind comments.
Comment from bhogg
I like your post. I think your notes said it all. I'm glad you took the time to sit down and put your thoughts on paper (or internet). I just wrote a post about hurricane Sally...mostly because I was taking a break from cleaning my yard up. I think we all need to write anytime the muse visits. Bill
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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I like your post. I think your notes said it all. I'm glad you took the time to sit down and put your thoughts on paper (or internet). I just wrote a post about hurricane Sally...mostly because I was taking a break from cleaning my yard up. I think we all need to write anytime the muse visits. Bill
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Thank you Bill.
Stay safe
Comment from oliver818
This is a sad little poem, and very touching. Family is so important and death is so hard to deal with even when it happened a long time ago. You evoked this well here. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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This is a sad little poem, and very touching. Family is so important and death is so hard to deal with even when it happened a long time ago. You evoked this well here. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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thank you very much for the review and comments.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, heartfelt, interesting and creative. I pondered on the theme of this poem as the author expressed these
words so well. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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The author's words are engaging, heartfelt, interesting and creative. I pondered on the theme of this poem as the author expressed these
words so well. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork compliments this poem.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your kind words and review
Comment from Cindy Decker
Mary,
I'm sorry you lost your mom at such a young age. This is a excellent poem in which you show your sadness and courage.
I hope you have found hugs since, because none of us were meant to be alone.
Good luck,
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Mary,
I'm sorry you lost your mom at such a young age. This is a excellent poem in which you show your sadness and courage.
I hope you have found hugs since, because none of us were meant to be alone.
Good luck,
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review and kind comments
Comment from Bill Schott
This poignant poem, What If?, opens that big question up to all the times that a mother's untimely death cuts off. The milestones of growing, and magic moments to share, all missing, replaced by the reminder of a mother gone too soon.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This poignant poem, What If?, opens that big question up to all the times that a mother's untimely death cuts off. The milestones of growing, and magic moments to share, all missing, replaced by the reminder of a mother gone too soon.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you Bill I appreciate your rating and kind thoughts.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks how sorrowful days you live if your mother had lived beyond your seven years you would have hugs, love and care and happiness in the family; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This poem speaks how sorrowful days you live if your mother had lived beyond your seven years you would have hugs, love and care and happiness in the family; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review and kind thoughts