Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "I Know"My book of poems and stories
31 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your words are touching and have meaning. "Great oceans bold, a spiral shell, cleaned by waves swell are words that show the impact of the ocean and the individual sees them in a different way. You have a strong steady beat and a smooth use of rhyming words.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Your words are touching and have meaning. "Great oceans bold, a spiral shell, cleaned by waves swell are words that show the impact of the ocean and the individual sees them in a different way. You have a strong steady beat and a smooth use of rhyming words.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Your support and kind review are so much appreciated.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"I Know", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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"I Know", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for your kind review. I appreciate the time you have taken to review my post.
Dear Anon,
you're very welcome.
God bless, take care and stay safe!
the Duchess
Comment from Boogienights
How sad! If this is a true story, it is very well told, bringing an essential truth that, even the blind can enjoy the fruits of the Earth. Why no kind friends though? Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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How sad! If this is a true story, it is very well told, bringing an essential truth that, even the blind can enjoy the fruits of the Earth. Why no kind friends though? Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for your kind review. I appreciate the time you have taken to review my post.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. You captured my attention from the first color to the last. I thought it was a marvelous way to
express one self... as the Bible says" None is is blind as those who can see
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. You captured my attention from the first color to the last. I thought it was a marvelous way to
express one self... as the Bible says" None is is blind as those who can see
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for your kind review. I appreciate the time you have taken to review my post.
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Your more than welcome
Cookie
Comment from estory
I think this poem brings out the poignancy, the pain, in the wide gulf between knowing and experiencing. Between imagining something out there and actually grasping it with your senses. Building memories on concrete experiences. I think your poem captured the pain in this condition. The loneliness it creates. estory
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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I think this poem brings out the poignancy, the pain, in the wide gulf between knowing and experiencing. Between imagining something out there and actually grasping it with your senses. Building memories on concrete experiences. I think your poem captured the pain in this condition. The loneliness it creates. estory
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for your kind review. I appreciate the time you have taken to review my post.
Comment from WriterHeather
It really is a tragedy. I can think of so many things I haven't yet seen and if my eye sight went it would shatter my heart. I can't imagine the struggle and heartbreak of those who are irreversibly blind
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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It really is a tragedy. I can think of so many things I haven't yet seen and if my eye sight went it would shatter my heart. I can't imagine the struggle and heartbreak of those who are irreversibly blind
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for your kind review. I appreciate the time you have taken to review my post.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad write and blind people see in other ways as their other senses are much keener and sharper, but nevertheless this impairment is tragic, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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This is a sad write and blind people see in other ways as their other senses are much keener and sharper, but nevertheless this impairment is tragic, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review and support.
Comment from Debra Franze
Great poem expressing the other senses. Nice rhythm. straight to the point. This is a difficult style of poem. Great job! You will do well. Congratulations on a well written poem.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Great poem expressing the other senses. Nice rhythm. straight to the point. This is a difficult style of poem. Great job! You will do well. Congratulations on a well written poem.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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I really thank you for your kind review and support of my entry in the Minute contest. Your time in reviewing is very much appreciated.
Comment from Vanna1
Your poem made me sad. It is not fair some cannot have what others take for granted. What a great piece. Good use of words. Good presentation as well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Your poem made me sad. It is not fair some cannot have what others take for granted. What a great piece. Good use of words. Good presentation as well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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I really thank you for your kind review and support of my entry in the Minute contest. Your time in reviewing is very much appreciated.
Comment from equestrik
The picture here is breath-takingly beautiful! I love the cadence and flow of your words and in reading, I have so much to be grateful for. This is truly lovely and a beautiful example for the writing prompt entry.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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The picture here is breath-takingly beautiful! I love the cadence and flow of your words and in reading, I have so much to be grateful for. This is truly lovely and a beautiful example for the writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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I really thank you for your kind review and support of my entry in the Minute contest. Your time in reviewing is very much appreciated.