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Writings From the Heart

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A book of Poetry & Writing

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Comment from Gungalo
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You are so right and it is very hard to break away from this. Too many times we will lose our place and find it harder getting back.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    thank you
reply by Gungalo on 16-Mar-2014
    Smile
reply by Gungalo on 16-Mar-2014
    Smile.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    made change thanks
reply by Gungalo on 16-Mar-2014
    Smile.
Comment from TAB_that's me
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I'm not sure if this is supposed to be poetry or prose but since it is under the poetry category and it is more of a statement, I had to give it a four.
Teresa

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    wwhat is poetry thanks
Comment from c_lucas
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Falling is one of the basic fears instilled in an infant. Fear of loud noises is the other. The rest are learned. This is very well written.


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 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    THANKS
reply by c_lucas on 16-Mar-2014
    You're welcome, DW. Charlie