Sunlight
When walking in the shady side of the road.48 total reviews
Comment from Vanna1
How nice to have that outlook. Good presentation. It is great to have such a positive attitude and count the many blessings we receive. So many take life for granted. I think nature brings us closer to the Creator.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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How nice to have that outlook. Good presentation. It is great to have such a positive attitude and count the many blessings we receive. So many take life for granted. I think nature brings us closer to the Creator.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Oh, what a delightful comment, thanik you, Vanna1.
Comment from Ann Market
This truly is a lovely poem that answers the writing prompt perfectly! Some things I enjoyed about the submission include the colorful descriptions of the scene, the calm rhythm, and the picture, which paired beautifully. Good luck to you in the writing prompt contest!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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This truly is a lovely poem that answers the writing prompt perfectly! Some things I enjoyed about the submission include the colorful descriptions of the scene, the calm rhythm, and the picture, which paired beautifully. Good luck to you in the writing prompt contest!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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How nice of you, Ann, thank you for reading my work.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like this poem and it is very encouraging. Yes. Why not think the light is shining just for you, from above and from God. We can all use some love and when we get it, don't ask why. Just enjoy it
Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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I like this poem and it is very encouraging. Yes. Why not think the light is shining just for you, from above and from God. We can all use some love and when we get it, don't ask why. Just enjoy it
Well done.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Yes, of course, take the light and run with it; maybe spread it as well. Thank you for your awesome comments.
Comment from Jessica M Lee
"a sliver of light lit my way, a sublime and warm embrace. I knew that light was intended for me..." When the storms of life beat on our doors, a break from it is nice. A time to settle the nerves and breathe a little. A time to take in what matters most - the littlest of things that we sometimes take advantage of. Our Heavenly Father knows our trials and gives us a glimmer of hope so that we have the "push" to continue on fighting. Nice work and best of luck in the contest:)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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"a sliver of light lit my way, a sublime and warm embrace. I knew that light was intended for me..." When the storms of life beat on our doors, a break from it is nice. A time to settle the nerves and breathe a little. A time to take in what matters most - the littlest of things that we sometimes take advantage of. Our Heavenly Father knows our trials and gives us a glimmer of hope so that we have the "push" to continue on fighting. Nice work and best of luck in the contest:)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Jessica, your comments are exquisite. I feel honored by your words.
Comment from equestrik
This fits the category very well for the encouraging poetry writing prompt. You have composed it well with your writing as well as your well chosen picture. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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This fits the category very well for the encouraging poetry writing prompt. You have composed it well with your writing as well as your well chosen picture. Best of luck.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your great comments, equestrik.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Sunlight", is an extremely well-written, and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review, this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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"Sunlight", is an extremely well-written, and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review, this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Duchess of great taste in poetry.
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Dear Anon,
you're very welcome. Flattery will get you every where.
God bless you, take care and keep safe!
the Duchess
Comment from Janet Foor
Taking a walk on a lovely day is certainly a good way to count our blessings. They are around us everywhere if we just stop and look.
Well done.
Blessings abound
Janet
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Taking a walk on a lovely day is certainly a good way to count our blessings. They are around us everywhere if we just stop and look.
Well done.
Blessings abound
Janet
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Hi Janet, thank you for your great words regarding this spiritual poem.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
When walking in the shady side of the road.
Sunlight
Hello, anonymous,
A wonderful entry for the encouraging poetry writing prompt contest. I agree with you, feeling grateful makes a big difference in the quality of life. Sometimes we feel connected to God or providence and it's a great feeling. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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When walking in the shady side of the road.
Sunlight
Hello, anonymous,
A wonderful entry for the encouraging poetry writing prompt contest. I agree with you, feeling grateful makes a big difference in the quality of life. Sometimes we feel connected to God or providence and it's a great feeling. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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I love your words, dear Gypsy lady.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
How fun! I love the way you put this -- that ray of sunlight and heart-warming touch was not just any errant beam of light - it was fully meant to speak directly to you. That's awesome!
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Poet,
How fun! I love the way you put this -- that ray of sunlight and heart-warming touch was not just any errant beam of light - it was fully meant to speak directly to you. That's awesome!
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Robin ...
Comment from June Sargent
We may not be on the sunny side of the street, but we can see the light on the sunny side. Our enjoyment of life does or should not depend upon our circumstances, but upon our outlook. We can choose to count our blessings or we can moan about our limitations. The sun still shines - either way. Thank you for your uplifting and thought-provoking piece
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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We may not be on the sunny side of the street, but we can see the light on the sunny side. Our enjoyment of life does or should not depend upon our circumstances, but upon our outlook. We can choose to count our blessings or we can moan about our limitations. The sun still shines - either way. Thank you for your uplifting and thought-provoking piece
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much June. Your lines here are so warm like a little ray of sunshine filtering through my windown, right this moment. Ah!
