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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about our inner sparkle and how to restore our sparkle when it seems lost. Our little sparkle needs constant inspirational ideas to keep it sparkling.
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A very well-written free verse poem about our inner sparkle and how to restore our sparkle when it seems lost. Our little sparkle needs constant inspirational ideas to keep it sparkling.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Sandra, smiles beaming back, thank you.!
Comment from Gloria ....
Free verse is definitely your forte, and you are extremely good at it. Excellent use of literary devices and a fine message to restore our balance in life.
Really good, J and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
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Free verse is definitely your forte, and you are extremely good at it. Excellent use of literary devices and a fine message to restore our balance in life.
Really good, J and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Gloria, I do thank you very much! Your validation of my free verse style is very appreciated.
Comment from Ann Market
Wow. Simply exceptional! This poem is so inspiring, and just what I needed to read! This is written spectacularly and the form is beautiful.
Thanks for posting this happy, joyful piece!
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Wow. Simply exceptional! This poem is so inspiring, and just what I needed to read! This is written spectacularly and the form is beautiful.
Thanks for posting this happy, joyful piece!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Ann, I am beyond yours of appreciation for your validation of this poem. Thank you so much!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned for the Free Versers Cub challenge - Sparkle. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri
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This is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned for the Free Versers Cub challenge - Sparkle. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
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Teri thank you! I do love scribing free verse poetry. Have a marvelous New Year?s Day of celebration, reflection and preparation.
Comment from equestrik
This is a good write and could well be used as a mindfullness excercise. i really enjoyed it. I think your picture choice is really good and well matched to your write.
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This is a good write and could well be used as a mindfullness excercise. i really enjoyed it. I think your picture choice is really good and well matched to your write.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'God's Restorative Power', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with with craft and skill. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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'God's Restorative Power', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with with craft and skill. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
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Duchess, it is my hope that 2021 is a yer of great abundance for you to use for good works. Thank you so much for the wonderful six-star review that is a capstone to my 2020 writings.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. Well written. It is original and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. Well written. It is original and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you Raul.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds meditative and soothing, concentrating on our breathing and letter our internal light sparkle for others to see and for us to enjoy, I hope the world sparkles in 2021, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x
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This sounds meditative and soothing, concentrating on our breathing and letter our internal light sparkle for others to see and for us to enjoy, I hope the world sparkles in 2021, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sherry Asbury2
I love this - and the pretty bauble accompanying your words. I started to meditate, it was so expressive. Sparkle - may we all sparkle in the New Year and let go the trials and tribulations of 2020. Very nice...
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I love this - and the pretty bauble accompanying your words. I started to meditate, it was so expressive. Sparkle - may we all sparkle in the New Year and let go the trials and tribulations of 2020. Very nice...
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
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Sherry, thank you. I am glad you enjoyed the invitation to pause.
Comment from Boogienights
This is a beautiful recommendation. I think I'll try in and see if I can find the happiness I've been missing in 2020. Some lovely imagery here, thanks for sharing.
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This is a beautiful recommendation. I think I'll try in and see if I can find the happiness I've been missing in 2020. Some lovely imagery here, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you!
